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Review of chapter "Who is this guy?" from mysticdreamer
Review:
Oh okay, sorry I must have mixed them up.. I was wondering why there was stark difference in the story line. In that case awesome story.. we really need more like it. :)
Comments from author:
XD It's all good. And thanks!
Review By [mysticdreamer] • Date [21 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who is this guy?" from mysticdreamer
Review:
Oh okay, sorry I must have mixed them up.. I was wondering why there was stark difference in the story line. In that case awesome story.. we really need more like it. :)
Review By [mysticdreamer] • Date [21 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Faith" from mysticdreamer
Review:
Okay I mostly like your story line..but your contradicting your self now .. you had them hearing about Lindsey Macdonald in th first part . And unless they have memory charm they should remember he was lawyer named Lindsey in his previous life..I think you need to rewrite your story or clarify why they don't remember Eliot being a lawyer.
Comments from author:
They were never told that Eliot used to be a lawyer in the first part. That's why they don't know. You might be confusing this story with The Lawyer Equation? They're different universes.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [mysticdreamer] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What do we do now?" from Gideon
Review:
A nice coming together and mending of various fences. They may still not like each other but a little respect and some trust has been earned on both sides. I like that you used Faith to tie in Elliot as the person that knew him best from the scooby side.
Comments from author:
I figured Faith seemed like the most likely to run into Lindsey-as-Eliot. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What do we do now?" from athenethegoddess
Review:
yay! and awwww :( yay, more updates, awww, no more updates. but looking forward to more stories! i'll need my fix until the new season starts ;)

~Athene
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. There's a few others that I'm working on and I've been on a writing kick, so I should be updating more soon (after the Week of Post Snow Week Tests).

Thanks for reading!
Review By [athenethegoddess] • Date [14 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What do we do now?" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Hey, a Lindsey-Angel meeting that doesn't end with anyone being eviscerated, or even losing a body part! I like the novelty of this! :)

Poor Eliot, though -- somehow, I don't think his infected wound is quite the 'nothing' he's trying to make it out to be (and judging by the title of the next story in this series . . . well, . . . !).
Comments from author:
I know! I was surprised myself when it wound up able to be written that way. XD

It's not, but he's gotten better. All it takes is extra care. ^^

Thanks for reading!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [13 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What do we do now?" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing it!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [13 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Battle" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Your action scenes seemed fine to me! But I admit I much prefer the after-battle healing and cuddling scenes, just for the warm fuzzy feeling I get from them. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

And I like the cuddling scenes too. They make me happy.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Plan" from (Past Donor)improvedpeanut
Review:
Love this story, I like the Faith/Eliot friendship as well as the Parker/Eliot brotherly-sister friendship.

I also love how Eliot feels that he was a victim of Angels, very consistent with Lindsey's feelings of their relationship.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I tried really hard to get both of those relationships to work at the same time without it being overly strange.

I'm glad you think so, and I'm glad you like the story. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Review By [(Past Donor)improvedpeanut] • Date [24 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Plan" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
I really love your take on the Eliot/Parker friendship. They really do seem to get each other rather well these days in the series, shown to great effect in park scene in "The Big Bang Job", and I'm glad that you showed that here as well.

Thanks for this story, it's been a great read and I'm looking forward to the rest. :)
Comments from author:
Yeah, they're kind of adorable. XD

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like the story. ^^
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Plan" from Rutager
Review:
Good story, but I've got to wonder about the weird perspective you've got. I'm all for Lindsay/Eliot switching sides - after all, pretty much every character on all 3 of these shows has done it, but you act like Lindsay/Eliot was the poor innocent victim of Angel's aggression. Lindsay/Eliot was the bad guy - which isn't to say Angel couldn't be a douche at times.
Comments from author:
Like John Rogers, creator of Leverage, always says "No one ever sees themselves as the bad guy." Since I'm writing 3rd person limited Eliot, he's going to portray Angel as bad; he's angry at the guy. And Eliot's team only knows him as that protective-brother personality he now holds.

I see what you're saying, though, and I completely understand it. Lindsey was an awful person. And so is Eliot (previous to team). But while he regrets things he did I'm sure, he still isn't the bad guy in his own mind. To him, his actions were completely justified and Angel's weren't, even though the truth is pretty much the other way around.

So it's not so much that I think Lindsey was the poor innocent victim, but that Lindsey thinks he was. ^^ 'Cause I know for a fact that he deserved most of what he got (except for the whole I-kill-you-now-that-you've-helped-me thing. That was cold.)

Thanks for the review! I'm sorry if that's been bugging you, but hopefully I explained it?
Review By [Rutager] • Date [21 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Plan" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I've been thoroughly enjoying your Parker, especially, with her matter-of-fact acceptance of the supernatural, her cheerful determination to stick tight to Eliot and find out what's going on whenever possible, and her comfort in Eliot's physical presence.
Comments from author:
I love Parker and Eliot. Not as a couple (though I don't mind that either XD), but as really close siblings. They're the most screwed up people they know and I think it's cute that they can understand each other so well.

Thanks so much for the review! ^^
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Confusion & Complications" from dreameralways
Review:
I am enjoying this fic and got a good laugh about certain parts, but I do have one small complaint. It's still sort of coming across like Angel was the bad guy through their past. Lindsey McDonald was a very, very bad guy when he first came on to the show. He was promoted to Special Projects because of how well he did as a lawyer. We know that Wolfram and Hart succeeded in their trials through witness intimidation and even the disappearance of witnesses. Lindsey wasn't just a good lawyer, he was willing to play dirty, that's why he got promoted into the section that brought him into contact with Angel. So Lindsey's villainy wasn't just what he did on the show, but what his history was prior to his appearance. He was exactly what Nate and Co. fight against now. And while most of us don't agree with Angel's ultimate betrayal of him, you can't deny that with a history like Lindsey's it was quite likely that he wasn't going against Wolfram and Hart for the greater good, but for plain and simple vengeance. He still wasn't really a good guy at the end. And now let me take one second to apologize because that rant isn't entirely directed at you, but a lot of the "Eliot is really Lindsey" stories. You seem to be trying to sort of place them on an equal wrongness footing, but I just can't see it that way.
But all of that rant said, I really do look forward to more. With Buffy and likely Willow coming out it should lead to even more confusion for Nate and more laughs for your readers. Thank you for writing.
Comments from author:
That's the thing that's really hard to finagle with Lindsey-is-Eliot: Lindsey was a terrible person. But to Lindsey, Angel was the bad guy as no one ever really sees themselves as the bad guy. As I'm writing in a more 3rd person limited style from Lindsey/Eliot's POV I'm trying to get Lindsey's feelings on the matter portrayed more heavily and to him Angel was always ruining his plans and his job and cut off his hand and tried to have him killed. And while at this point in his life Eliot realizes that he was wrong back then, he's still sore about these things because he feels that Angel was acting just as badly as him: As the 'hero' in the situation back then, Angel shouldn't have been behaving that way. It's the double standard he has set up in his mind in order to not feel extreme guilt about what he's done. (And yeah, Lindsey in S5? Totally just there for revenge on W&H and Angel. XD)

And I am trying to get them to 'equal wrongness' because that's how Eliot sees it: they were both wrong back then. And honestly, I do feel that the way Angel ultimately dealt with Lindsey was wrong, but Lindsey never really gave him a reason to not act that way, did he? XD

Thanks for the rant/review and for taking the time to write it. I appreciate it.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [21 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Confusion & Complications" from athenethegoddess
Review:
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! More! Yay!

Ok. I'm done with the squeeing. Glad to see more of this, it's one of my favorites.

~Athene
Comments from author:
XD Thanks, glad to hear it.
Review By [athenethegoddess] • Date [12 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Confusion & Complications" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great update full of Elliot's wishful thinking about his team not prying into his past.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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