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Review of chapter "Chapter 5: A Second Chance" from Genuka
Review:
could use a bit more involvement/detail but overall a good effort, especially with the writers block.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [18 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: A Second Chance" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting twists...
eagerly awaiting to read more ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [18 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: A Second Chance" from Elleria
Review:
So very happy to see an update on this. :-)
Review By [Elleria] • Date [17 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: A Second Chance" from DemonChyld
Review:
Finally! An update! It's good to see you still writing! Hopefully you get more written soon! Take care and have fun!
Review By [DemonChyld] • Date [17 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: A Second Chance" from slmncpm
Review:
it is very good to see a new chapter here! thank you!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Leaving Sunnydale" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
I think I'm going to drop out here. I don't see it as realistic that Xander would just up and leave Willow and Jesse behind - he was a far more loyal friend than that; this is now too OOC for me.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: A Second Chance" from Harry
Review:
Its good to see you back to work on this one! And while I can't help with Beta (Working on a RW/BTVS story AND a new chapter for the mega crossover story Code Ragnarok here on TTH), I don't mind leaving a review or two. And as for episodes to twist, how about the one where Calleigh has to use her skills to let Horatio know what is going on with these people that have kidnapped her.
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: A Fresh Start" from (Past Donor)Dianasis
Review:
You made me tear up in the middle of Starbucks. The few bits of verbal roughness are nothing when encased in the pathos of your storytelling. Thanks. :)
Comments from author:
Crying in your coffee. Well, for this story, that's a huge compliment, thank you.
Review By [(Past Donor)Dianasis] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: A Fresh Start" from LuvinDrDj
Review:
This story is great, I ♥ it! Please write more soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks. We'll see what I can do after my classes are finished.
Review By [LuvinDrDj] • Date [11 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: A Fresh Start" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Poor Xanny. So happy you updated.
Comments from author:
Didn't plan to make him cry, but it felt right for the moment.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [30 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Learning a Secret" from EricJablow
Review:
You know, bone marrow transplantation is almost never the first treatment for any disease, because it is always dangerous. They start off by killing off the patient's existing bone marrow, which can lead to fatal infections. Then, even with a family donor, there's graft-versus-host disease, which is as unpleasant as it sounds. BMT is not a magic bullet.

More realistically, they would have put Xander on chemotherapy, and he'd be in the hospital for a few weeks of pain, as the doctors were trying to induce a remission. Only later if necessary would the doctors search for a BMT match, and only if they determined that an autologous transplant wouldn't work. The story is just moving too fast.

Besides, after a transplant, he'd still be prone to infections, would be on immunosuppressive drugs, and generally need very careful handling.

Some leukemias can only be cured with BMT--AML, for example. But children and teens are more prone to ALL and Hodgkin's disease.

Sorry, but I went through (non-BMT) treatment problems with my mother; I had to do a lot of reading. I've seen too many stories that use transplantation unrealistically.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the info. Chalk it up to questionable doctors at Sunnydale, okay? I do have a plan that should make it okay.
Review By [EricJablow] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: A Fresh Start" from Harry
Review:
Well, Xander is just starting to meet the members of his new extended family. He just met the Father of the group in H, and the maternal figure in Alexx. But wait till he gets a look at Calleigh! If she wasn't the sister, he would be going after her in a heartbeat!
Comments from author:
Oh, I think he'll drool over her anyway.
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Leaving Sunnydale" from Harry
Review:
I think that Speed just found out the hard way why Xander said that Red is the reliable member of the trio. And Willow can be certain about one thing: Speed is a man of his word. He says he will be a good big brother to Xander even when they are grandparents, you can take that to the bank!
Comments from author:
It's nice when you find a good family member.
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Reunited" from Harry
Review:
Well, Speed just meet up with Xander's best friends. And if he needs to know anything about him, these two are the ones to ask. And if and when Willow reaches the age to leave this town, if she has gotten her hacking skills down good, she might just truly impress H!
Comments from author:
They'll probably tell him if he's screwing up with Xander or not.
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Making Plans" from Harry
Review:
Well, Speed is doing the right thing. He's making practical plans for the future. And I can hardly wait for Xander to meet his extended family, the CSI Miami group. He is going to be a welcome member to this extended family.
Comments from author:
Sometimes Speed can seem irresponsible (ie. his gun), but I don't think he could be on H's team if he wasn't a planner.
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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