Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Chargone
Highly amusing, though the banter does lead to very little actually getting done in most chapters. Also slightly surprised at how little it sounds like Xander takes advantage of his position, though it makes sense that he hasn't done so 'on screen' so far.
Please, do continue. The characters are wonderful and the plot's barely begun (if that)!
Review By [Chargone
] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from nerfherder
Ah, a pleasant re-read early in tbe morning! I still eagerly anticipate an update!
Review By [nerfherder
] • Date [28 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from misterwhy
Just read this story today. I was falling off my bed laughing myself into stitches.
Review By [misterwhy
] • Date [25 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Shadowzahejihog
This has been a laugh. Then Xander was a massive massive massive dick and hypocrite.
Specifically in the Stalking Buffy then getting affronted when she confronted him and Angel situation. I hope it's not blown over if this ever continues.
Review By [Shadowzahejihog
] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from ColdFang
Very Nice Story! Incredibly Entertaining. Love Al's personality. Highly amused when people beat him to the punch and outwit him. Was really happy to see another chapter appear for it after so long. Gonna keep watching for more! :)
Review By [ColdFang
] • Date [12 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from tavinseven
I really like this idea but the dialogue for the last couple of chapters leave much to be desired. I understand that your using it for the purpose of blowing peoples minds but it makes it hard on the reader when you have three or four chapters where the characters talk in circles and nothing gets accomplished. I hope you continue this story because it is really great but I hope the characters start being more direct in their speech.
Review By [tavinseven
] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Semet
O.O!!!!!! You updated! One of my favorite fics ever and it's been updated! Thanks much for the amusement that this story gives!
All the best,
Review By [Semet
] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Morgomir
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir
] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from DieselDriver
Yay! Fun! Weird but fun! When can we have more?
Review By [DieselDriver
] • Date [14 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from dialNforNinja
Ah, I'm glad to see this continue again! Such a fun little yarn.
I've forgotten, when did Dracula show up in canon BtVS? Seeing this Xander and his 'pets' deal with that imposter should be hilarious.
For later on, I'm torn between wanting a basically canon Dawn who at least wants in on the Xan-harem if she can't get him solo, and one who is inserted as a member of it directly. Either way, she and Lilith should be constantly egging each other on and getting into mischief. Either way, trying to explain the situation to Joyce without spilling the monster beans should also lead to a series of amusinglyh awkward moments, until one of the less restrained ones (Morrigan or Lilith most likely) get tired of watching the same farce and just tell her, proofs provided in person, which leads to a whole new flavor of awkward and funny.
Review By [dialNforNinja
] • Date [12 Dec 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from borgrabbit
Cool. An update! So random!
Review By [borgrabbit
] • Date [10 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Rhose
^^ your back! an this chappy was just as good as the others ^^
Review By [Rhose
] • Date [7 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Bill
LOL! Gotta love the brain break-age.
Review By [Bill
] • Date [4 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Nrahl
Love this story. Quite excited to read the new part. Keep it up.
Review By [Nrahl
] • Date [4 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from WCSII
Oh man... all the hilarity of a crack fic, without the actual crack. (believe me, this isn't crack, check CrazyDan, or DogbertCarrol if you want to see crack fic) It's been too long since I've read someone's work that is actual comedy and not slap stick or (exhaulting the comedic virtue thereof) Seinfield copy cats (which has no comedic value, much less virtue, to exhault) Could use further proof reading, or a beta reader to catch what you've missed, but still I'm able to muddle through it enough to know what's going on, and laugh at what I assume is meant to be humor. Cause if it was meant to be anything else, ... well.
Review By [WCSII
] • Date [3 Dec 13] • Not Rated