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Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen – Always a Little Further Part 5" from DarmanSkirata
Review:
Absolutely amazing. This is by far one of the best stories I have read on this site, the characters aren't OP, and everything is fairly logical. Unlike some stories that suddenly have the characters who were friends suddenly turning on each other for no real reason other than that is what was needed to make their story work.
I do hope you continue this story one day, and I will admit that I am a little curious about WHAT aliens some of these groups have stopped in the past. Hmm... The X-Com aliens WOULD work, but I don't see such a group existing in the same universe as the Go'ould. Maybe the aliens from Xenonaughts.
Anyways, I hope that this great story continues someday.
Review By [DarmanSkirata] • Date [15 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen – Always a Little Further Part 5" from cloudleonsgurl
Review:
Hello! It's been awhile, hasn't it? Everything good?

Such an amazing story. I don't know if I have reviewed it already or not, but it is definitely worth a second read. Or three. I hope you will continue with it. :D

Mariah
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [30 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen – Always a Little Further Part 5" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
This has gotten steadily better since the first installment. Good work and I hope you come back to it some day.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [7 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen – Always a Little Further Part 5" from LordSia
Review:
This story - all my love. Keep up the good work.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [24 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen – Always a Little Further Part 5" from (Current Donor)Ironbear
Review:
Heya. Good stuff.

I really hope you manage to finish this at some point. This story was one of the inspirations for the Hell-er-nator series I have going, and I've really enjoyed what you have so far.
Review By [(Current Donor)Ironbear] • Date [11 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen – Always a Little Further Part 5" from storiescollector
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Have really enjoyed this story. Wondering what will happen when the Initiative and Faith and "T" meet to retrieve Kendra's body. I assume that there will be "deniable" assistance from the SAS. Hope RL isn't causing too much trouble and I hope Chapter 18 will be up soon. Thanks for your efforts.
Review By [storiescollector] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen – Always a Little Further Part 5" from demonichellfire
Review:
Finish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [demonichellfire] • Date [29 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven – Free Spirits Part Five" from Doodle
Review:
Excellent chapter. 1,000/10


What is the "City of the Slayers"?
Review By [Doodle] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen – Always a Little Further Part 5" from Morgomir
Review:
First, let me congratulate you on another great chapter. Second, I wish you a speedy and full recovery from your injuries. Keep up the magnificent work.
Comments from author:
Thank you kindly. :)

Thanks for the best wishes, but actually I've already recovered, thanks; I've been out of hospital for a couple of months or so by now.

Chapter 18 is already in the works, and I hope to have it ready to go fairly soon-ish. :)

Best wishes, and ride free!

- El ;)
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [5 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen – Always a Little Further Part 5" from kenja
Review:
Hey, welcome back dude. I've joined tth recently and this fic is amongst my favs. hope you're better & keep writing, you're good at it.
Comments from author:
Thank you kindly, and welcome to tth! :) Yep, I'm back to normal (or as close as I ever get... ;D) and I certainly intend to; aside from anything else, it's great fun.

Best wishes, and ride free!

- El ;)
Review By [kenja] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen – Always a Little Further Part 5" from AndreaMaine
Review:
Oh boy you have an interesting storyline going on here and when Dru a few chapters ago quoted Battlestar Galactica the Reimagined Series, "All of this has happened before and will happen again..." I think we're in for another group of people to come out from the shadows sometime. I guess the Brits don't care that H-Troop operating out of Sunnyhell could be construed by the US and the US Armed Forces as an act of war or even just an illegal operation. I hope that as things go the SGC comes in and deals with some of the troubles in Sunnyhell. I think the SAS H-Troop could use a shorter Logistics chain and the SGC could provide that as long as the deal included an SG-Team assigned to Sunnyhell.
Comments from author:
Thank you kindly; I try to keep things interesting and avoid being too predictible. ;)

Erm... actually, more than one group will be emerging from the shadows... in a variety of ways.

Meh... when you're writing fiction that involves the supernatural, aliens, and time-travelling killer robots, you really have to just let piddly little trivial matters like international law just go hang. ;D
I mean, come on, look at all the times in their respective canons that the Scooby Gang, SG-1, and Team Gibbs went against 'the rules', often not merely breaking said rules but smashing enormous holes through them big enough to steer a battleship through? The Scoobies blew up a school, SG-1 went AWOL (in the Season 1 finale) and often violate the Posse Comitatus Act, Team Gibbs get up to all sorts of things that are technically illegal...
So, yeah; personally, I prefer to stick to 'the rule of cool' when writing fiction. If your characters rigidly obey the rules all the time, it just gets bor-ing! ;)

As for the future... well, we'll have to wait and see. ;)

Thanks for the review, and best wishes,

- El ;)
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen – Always a Little Further Part 5" from Studyofchaos
Review:
So sorry to hear about the rl issues, all the best. I was excited to see this story was still alive. Excellent work, looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you kindly, and I'm glad you're enjoying the series! :)

Best wishes, and ride free!

- El ;)
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen – Always a Little Further Part 5" from eriktheviking
Review:
A classy take on what the Watchers can actually be about. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you kindly! :) I'm really glad you liked my approach.

Best wishes, and ride free!

- El ;)
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two – In Uncharted Territory" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
Fake FBI agents, NCIS, NID and a Terminator....who what a combo....
Comments from author:
Oh, yes, there's a LOT of fun you can have writing about a wide and varied assortment of characters like that. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One – Fallout" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
ohaaa..poor Ethan...even if he was a scumbag I always kind of liked him.
Comments from author:
To be honest, so did I. But I'm afraid it just seemed to work out that way... still, he survives most of my other fanfic plot lines (in my fanfic 'A Collection of Ideas and Curiosities') so I don't feel too bad for him. ;)

Thanks for reviewing, and best wishes,

El ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [17 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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