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And Baby Makes Two

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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Taisy
Review:
Cool, I like the way they think about each other in this. That part was very well done, especially Puck's thoughts. I liked the image of her touching the walls in the different houses and getting totally different feelings. You've got a few grammar mistakes. Maybe a beta would help or going through the chapters again yourself, but good job anyway.

Thanks for the interesting read.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the review. My biggest struggle was to keep them sounding in character so I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I thought I had caught the grammar mistakes, but I freely admit that that is not my strong point by a long shot. I will have someone else look it over for me. Thanks again for the review.
Review By [Taisy] • Date [30 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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