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Review of chapter "Waking" from CPTSkip
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Very emotional beginning and I'm not sure I can say I liked it, but I do hope to read more. There needs to be more Tara stories.

I did notice one spelling error. You wrote: "The sister that just went THREW something very" when you should have written: "The sister that just went THROUGH something very".
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Attacked" from MarcusSLazarus
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Interesting idea plot-wise, but it's too early to really say much about how everything comes together (If nothing else, what benefits from preventing Peter from healing Andrea, and why would it do that?)
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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