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Review of chapter "Phantom Days: Lost Souls" from DeaconKrow
So I was looking for Xander related Star Trek crossovers and found this. To keep it in context I read Buffy meets Star Trek first and I was very pleased. I didn't know what to expect when I got to this story, but I'm really digging it. I can't wait for the next part. I'm also eager to find out what Data is working on behind her back. I kinda saw the direction this was going when Willow started into the blessing people and "fixing" things with magic for the crew. She seemed to be falling into the bad habits that would have taken her into the badness of the addiction in season 6. Overall very well done and I can't wait for more.
Review By [DeaconKrow] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Phantom Days: Lost Souls" from Dragonelf
Nice job with the new chapter.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Strawberry Chocolate Cake::

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"I am Grey. I stand between the candle
and the star. We are Grey. We stand
between the darkness and the light."
- Delenn, Babylon 5
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [19 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Phantom Days: Lost Souls" from loyaleskamoe
Awesome. I loved the resolution. It was something that Willow in the cannon could really have used. I don't want to say too much in case anyone reads this before the chapter, but this did not disappoint even a little. I'm hoping that you'll move on soon to see what shenanigans Buffy's been getting up to either the Klingons soon. That promises to be very interesting indeed. Of course, I'm in no hurry to move away from the Phantom either as Willow and Xander are my two favorite characters from "Buffy" and Nog one of my faves from "DS9". As always, please continue the excellent work!
Review By [loyaleskamoe] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Phantom Days: The Haunted Sea" from loyaleskamoe
Gah! A horrible spot to end a chapter! Sure, it's fine if you're the author. Then you can laugh as your readers suffer from the treacherous lack of more story!

Ah well. Still, I'm happy there was more at all, and must compliment you on another fun chapter. The first scene was cute, and I very much appreciate how in character the Scoobies are in this alien environment. Especially Willow with her attitude this chapter. While I doubt she'll go full on Darth Rosenberg in this universe, I still felt she has the potential to do so, if not the means.

A minor format critique regarding the scene break Starfleet bars. I personally found such repeated use of them during the fog scene to be a bit jarring. That's just my opinion though, and it in no way effected my overall enjoyment of this chapter.

Well done on setting up the next one too! I am very much looking forward to how the day gets saved!
Comments from author:
My apologies to you for the annoying scene divider logos. Hope the quick addition of the new chapter makes up for it.
Review By [loyaleskamoe] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Phantom Days: The Haunted Sea" from (Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Great story and series.

Goes to show that Starfleet PTB's can be just as non-thinking as any large bureaucracy as they put in a strict, by the book, not particularly outside the box Captain in charge of a mission to chase down the completely outside the box supernatural. Must have been Janeway who made that decision, it would fit right in with her stupendously idiotic decisions she made throughout Voyager.
Review By [(Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Phantom Days: Reporting For Duty" from Dragonelf
You have done a good job so far with this story and I hope we will see you inspired to add more chapters soon.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Chocolate Apple Pie::

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Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [22 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End & The Beginning: PROLOGUE" from loyaleskamoe
I was enjoying the initial version of this story, but I do agree that it has returned in a much better form. Willow telling this tale to two trusted officers seems more likely than to some random reporter. And the sense of dread from the Mysterious Warbird? I have literally been thinking about who she thought was on that ship for the past three days! I am also enjoying how natural the way the Spooky Group is fitting in. Or not, in some cases.

The fact that the vast practical experience the advisers to PRD is not as useful as one might think is, I feel, a great touch. I'm sure as the mission continues, the Phantom's captain will be proven quite wrong by our favorite Sunnydalers as their instincts kick in, and they save the day with the help of your very well-rounded original characters.

Your art is fantastic as well, by the way. Great job all around! I can't wait to read on!
Comments from author:
Thanks so much. So few people bother to tell you how they find the story. It's nice to hear about it sometimes.
Review By [loyaleskamoe] • Date [12 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Phantom Days: Reporting For Duty" from (Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Really good story. Given how Odo was treated by some in the Federation, no doubt the concerns about the Federation following in the Initiative's footsteps are more than justified.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it so far, thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [10 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Phantom Days: Reporting For Duty" from EasterCat
Glad you're continuing this story. Look forward to its continuation.
Comments from author:
Thanks, cat.
It really is appreciated. I get so few reviews it's difficult to find the motivation to carry on with it.
To be honest, i don't even know if anyone's bothering to read it!
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [10 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death & Destiny: What's My Line Again?" from MarcusSLazarus
While I still consider Worf's death a tragedy, it certainly sets an interesting standard for this story that I look forward to seeing developed in future chapters, and your idea about how the Scoobies can both return to Earth AND remain with Starfleet was excellent in its simplicity.

Plus, hey; Willow as the Captain of the "Enterprise"? What's NOT to like about that?

Keep up the great work; can't wait for an update!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [9 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death & Destiny: What's My Line Again?" from draconis
What happened here? You rewrote and are re-posting the entire story to date? (I see the 1st story in the series has NOT been re-posted)
Comments from author:
Hi. This IS the story. I wasn't happy with the first opening at all.
Review By [draconis] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Not Rated
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