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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Runewolf
Review:
I just read this, and it's very intriguing so far. The thing I don't quite get is how Willow can communicate with Mystique, when none of the other possessed people seem to be experiencing the same thing. My guess is that it's either Mystique's powers, or Willow's magic.

Thanks for the story so far.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story, so far.

And the difference is more a matter of mindset, with Willow's power allowing her to shake off what would normally have been a sort of 'back seat driver' viewpoint when she saw Mystique murder Jonathan.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [6 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from borgrabbit
Review:
Haiku of concern:

Is the story dead
Be nice to see where it led
Your muse—has it fled

I know it hasn't been THAT long since you updated, but I just wanted you to know that I like your story and eagerly await an update.
Comments from author:
Not to worry - this will be continued.

Just exactly when is yet to be determined. ;-)
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Genuka
Review:
Good story so far. I wonder what will happen when whichever group finds Ethan? And what will be left behind?
Comments from author:
Very good questions, which will be addressed in the next couple chapters. ;-)
Review By [Genuka] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting story. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I will.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [5 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Oxnate
Review:
Okay, I remember reading the first two chapters and loving the fact that you brought Mystique into it. But I can't seem to find a review that I thought I'd made, telling you of that fact. So, I am now. ... telling you that fact. And I'm done.

Moving on.

So, Jono's dead. I always liked him, but I'm far more impressed that you're letting your characters kill somewhat major characters. That can only mean a great story further on.

Ooo, Cordelia put in her place. I like it. I've never had a use for Cordy until she went through A LOT of Character Growth on Angel.

("At least, not as far as the body you've gone and occupied is concerned,") -- Gah! My pet peeve and bane of all Halloween fics. People who dress as generic characters (soldier, ghost, noble-lady, or in this case: themselves as Strigoi) get to look like themselves. People who dress as specific people (Sabertooth, JoJo, various monsters) do NOT look like the bodies they possess. (Though I'd be willing to give you a pass for Raven, as a shapeshifter)

Over all, I certainly liked it.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story.

And the death toll in Sunnydale is very likely to go up some more before the night's through. ;-)
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Wormbait
Review:
Interesting take on the halloween idea, I look forward to seeing where you take things.

I like Ravens working on Willow's inner anger over her life of being bullied to persuade her that revenge is justified.

Disappointed that Xander instantly went Uber as he always does in a halloween fic, this time taking Buffy along for the ride, but I can focus mostly on the Willow/Mystique parts, now with added Andrew.
Comments from author:
Well, making Xander and company uber merely means that the enemies they face later are that going to be that much more powerful.

And Raven knows exactly which buttons to push to make Willow respond the way she'd like.
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from michaelangelo
Review:
Bonus! lmfao :) a Chihuahua, class. I totally loved that, thanks for the laugh.
Comments from author:
Yep. A useless, yappy, annoying little bitch seemed to be a perfect fit. ;-)
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from RHatch
Review:
good update
Comments from author:
Thanks. More in the not too distant future.
Review By [RHatch] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Zyanadryn
Review:
Fantastic story so far!!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate your reviewing and letting me know you liked it.
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Very good chapter
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. ;-)
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from OlBear
Review:
Another excellent chapter from a truly talented writer. Every time a see a new post with your name on it I know that I'm going to find a superbly crafted story. Waiting with baited breath for the next update of whatever story you're working on.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I really appreciate the good words, and I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying the story.

I've got chapters for several stories in the process of being finalized at the moment, and I'm not sure which one will be finished first.
Review By [OlBear] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CPTSkip
Review:
I had a shiver of both excitement and anticipation run down my spine when I read the last few lines of your story. I just can not believe Mayor Dick III is going to enjoy his meeting with his noble visitors. I also wonder how your Helloween is going to effect the future of the Standard Buffyverse. I must admit the idea of Cordy as a pet to the Count and Countess Lavel amuses me.
Comments from author:
Well, first off, thanks for reviewing.

And as far as the standard Scooby-verse is concerned, that is falling farther away to the rear with each passing second, and won't be seen again. ;-)

And if Cordy is going to be a bitch, she should look like one, right? ;-)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Netchka
Review:
Interesting story start. Hope there is more coming at some point. Can't wait.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story. ;-)

I've got the next chapter partially written, and am waiting to see if my muse wants to add anything to what I've got right now.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [27 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Mechconstrictor
Review:
Great story so far. I hope to see more of it.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying thte story. The next chapter is partially done, and I'm trying to get it finished, right now.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from ElDani
Review:
This has been a wonderfully different take on the whole Hallowe'en story-line from the show. I hope your muse will catch up to you sooner or later and you'll be able to continue this, because I'd certainly love reading more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. I've got the next draft almost ready to send out to be beta'd, so it should be showing up fairly soon.
Review By [ElDani] • Date [1 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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