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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from maxthehobbit
Review:
Interesting, I like the way you write Spike. He suffered a lot in this story, killing his 'daughter' and then thinking Dru was dead or dusted ... dead dead. I'll read the next installment of this series when you finish it, seems to be abandoned like about half the stories on this site. But this was a very good read.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [11 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from MMWillow
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Love Spike and Luna they make such an interesting pair that oddly suit each other. The connection between Luna and Dru is priceless and a great way of explaining why Spike is so very good with Luna. Freaky with Dru, Lucius, and Bellatrix being vampires that's just creepy!
Review By [MMWillow] • Date [16 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Current Donor)Listener
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Well, that was fun. I think some of the crossovers (especially the L&O one -- getting out of police custody is hard to write) were a bit distracting, but the main story -- the SPN crossover -- was good enough to sustain it. I really didn't think you were going to go that route; I thought they were just going to pop up once or twice.

I did know that Drusilla would be the ultimate Big Bad of the story -- it was kind of obvious after the tea party -- but I do like how you brought in Bellatrix, and now the three of them are going to wreak havoc in the next story. I thought Lucius was good and dead, but I suppose he must not quite have been if that was him at the end.

Writing a convincing 14-year-old, even one as weird as Luna, is difficult. I think you did a good job with her.

And now the long wait until "Willow's Choice" is complete. I shall be patient.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from MarcusSLazarus
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A highly interesting bit of work you’ve got here, to say the least.

If nothing else, I hope you’re going to follow up on a few of the more minor crossovers you included here; the fact that the Winchesters are coming back might be a definite, but there’s a few other interesting touches like Lane’s Slayer status- point to you for resisting the obvious route of making Rory the Slayer-, and the ‘True Blood’ elements have potential too, even if the possibilities offered by the young Winchesters is DEFINITELY the plot I’m most looking forward to seeing followed up.

Your exploration of Luna’s Guardian powers would be excellent even without the highly engaging team of her and Spike as this story’s focus, the parental-esque bond between them being explored in a highly engaging manner despite some of the other issues they face (Notably the Winchesters’ initial difficulty in accepting that they’re not evil just because they’re not completely human).

I also admired your ideas for some of the problems they faced during their search, on that topic; the twist in the ‘SVU’ crossover of Olivia being the Slayer AND a little girl being the killer was a very interesting ‘inversion’ of the expected formula for both,, and Penelope’s history with Spike and Drusilla gave her that interesting touch that makes all the really great villains truly terrifying.

And as for that last scene with Drusilla and Bellatrix...

I think it’s safe to say that’s going to be trouble; those two are so crazy that they can’t get any madder without starting to become sane again, and that’s WITHOUT the possibilities raised by their ally.

Keep up the good work; can’t wait for more!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [7 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Cmiller
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is the sequel going up soon????
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [14 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from ladyvisionary
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Hi! I'm so sorry for not reviewing - but this chapter: Oh My effing G! Bellatrix as a vampire? Bellatrix wth Drusilla? Two insane vamps?! Allow me to freak - of joy! This can only take us to CRAZY levels of awesomeness in the WT sequel: literary! :D
Comments from author:
MWAAHAHAHAHA! It's brilliantly evil and delicious, isn't it? ;) I plan on having some fun with these kids!

Thanks dear!
Review By [ladyvisionary] • Date [14 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Aryll
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I was kind of hoping Bellatrix was dead...but then again she's just so batty and deliciously evil and completely fun to read. She and Drusilla may possibly be the most hilarious insane vampire duo to ever darken a HP/BtVS crossover. Oh the evil shenanigans to look forwards to. And I did not see Lucius coming! Mwahah, great ending ;D
Comments from author:
Quite honestly, it was a hard decision. I really wanted to have a vamp!Bellatrix but I also wanted to actually *kill* one of my villains for once. But as you said, she's so deliciously evil that I couldn't - especially with the combination of Dru and Lucy ;)

MWAHAHAHAHAA! ;)

Thanks for reading Aryll! :D
Review By [Aryll] • Date [12 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fidgeting Like a Flobberworm" from Aryll
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Aw, a best friend is exactly what those two need. Also huge aw at Luna's first kiss. I'm wondering if Sam and Dean with be making an appearance in Willow's Choice -- which I'm really looking forward too :) -- ?

I loved the scene with Gaea blessing the first Guardians, its always so much fun to learn more about the mythos you have going in your stories! The whole finale was great, from Jo's magic lock picking to the Sasquatch army and especially Luna's epic arrival. Tree power vs vampire will always win :)

Thanks so much for this wonderful story. One more chapter to go!
Comments from author:
I know, don't they need best friends? They're the perfect pair of misfits ;)
Sam and Dean in Willow's Choice...likely not...*however* I have some ideas for short stories involving them in this universe later on ;)

As you know, I love tying in the various mythologies! It's always fun :)

Thanks so much for reading!
Review By [Aryll] • Date [12 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from slmncpm
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oh i have loved it all along and i am sad to see it end. thank you so much for sharing it with us. blessings.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading and reviewing slmncpm! I'm so happy you enjoyed it :)
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Eureka
Review:
Dru is going to turn Lucy? OK Now I def can't wait for the next installment!
Comments from author:
MWAHAHAHAHAA ;)

The next installment will feature a lot of baddies - it'll be a good time ;)

Thanks for reading!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from MistressRed
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I absolutely LOVE this series so far. I can't wait for the next installment. Luna is awesome (both of them), but I do hope it has some Willow-y goodness.
Comments from author:
Thank you MistressRed!

Oh yes, the next installment will be chock-full of Willow-y goodness! It will be a lot like the first story in the series - centered on Willow and Sirius but with a nice supporting cast who get a good deal of shining moments throughout the fic.
Review By [MistressRed] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Dmitri
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The last chapters + the Epilogue were simply fun! Thanks for the great story.

Luna has found her true destiny and her inner strength (well, she did!) and kicked all of the villians' asses, except for Dru, who, of course, is quite the ass-kicker in her own right.

Bellatrix as a vampire is going to be something, I'm sure, but when exactly did Lucius get turned? I kind off had the impression that Sirius and Willow have pretty much obliterated him beyond recovery, or is he a totally different sort of undead instead?

Either way, Luna's going to have her work cut-out for her, but maybe Dean will come over some time in the future and help out? grin
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading Dmitri! :)

When we last saw Lucius Malfoy he was in the Principal's office at Sunnydale, battling Sirius, when Sirius threw him out into a hallway of Turok-Han and slammed the door shut. We have not seen Lucius since...until now. The details of his story lie within the next book of the series :)

In my mind, the Willow's Thief universe is large and I have an idea of what happens to just about every character. I don't know if I'll have a chance to write everything, but I do see Luna and Dean interacting again in the future, along with Sam and some of the BTVS/HP crew. :)
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
You know, there are entirely too many stories where that bastard just won't die? Well done.
Comments from author:
ha, well I don't read a lot of HP fics where that bastard just keeps on living but he really is that type - he's just toooo deliciously evil to put him 6 feet under and keep him there ;)

Thank you for reading!
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blessings from the Great Earth Mother" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Now what else might be in tha tchest...And I assume Dru got away again? A pity she can't be de-vamped and de-madded. A fully treined Guardian would be very useful.

Thanks for writing and looking forward to the next book as well as chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing :)

Yes, the chest will come in handy throughout the years :)

Dru did get away...but we'll see her again...very soon... ;) I do wish that could happen, and she could be useful to Luna, but I won't count that out for now...one never knows...

:)
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Furry Calvary Cometh" from Eureka
Review:
Loved how she got out of it! Now to wonder HOW Sammy is gonna get away from that curse! Perhaps demon show up just in time to be hit with it? THAT would be irony!!! Demon show up to kill Sammy and get killed it's self! LOL
Love that the family DID watch out for Luna!
Chest takes Luna...Mayhap like in another story that Xander was taken (in his sleep of course) and trained for 7 years! After time is up Luna come back and not much time has past...

Glad that I was right about the family keeping tabs on her. ;)
Comments from author:
Yes! Our Luna is a tricky one. I like the idea of the demon showing up, but he's still on the FL right now.

Your idea about Luna coming back after a couple years was genius. I actually thought about rewriting my chapter, BUT I didn't want her to advance in age and maturity due to wanting to keep her a Hogwarts kid for the next story.

Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [6 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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