I actually did look up the binary and the Morse code. So, I got the Jonno joke before even Giles did. Didn't know if there was any significance to those numbers.
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AH-HA!
At last, somebody commented on the binary numbers!
Well, it was a slow, kinda iffy start, but an excellent ending. I see an epilogue. It's a .gif of Katrina-bot and the First, 200 years later. Katrina-bot is reciting Pi, the First it demanding she stop. and slowly going insane. lol
I rate this as a 9 for the touching ending. It reminds me of a scene in a movie...I thnk it was called the Professional. In this scene, the dying assassin hands a corrupted law officer a linch pin from a grenade and whispered "For Matilda". The only thing that bothered me about this chapter was Willow's response to Andrew...and everyone else 'lack of response' for that matter. Not one person sought to ask Andrew if this was his doing or Willow asking why she was stopped.
Review By [Gulanticus] • Date [17 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Nice chapter! I like how Andrew is finally coming to terms with what he and the rest of the Trio did; it's touching. And the nuclear batteries....nice BOOM!!!
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [16 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Nice chapter, an interesting twist on canon, but so far, it's pretty well done. I like the part where Andrew wen toe to toe with the First and just stared it down, that was epic.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [16 Nov 10] • Not Rated
I didn't know what to think about this story....I knida still don't; not that it at all bad, it's pretty good, and it's pretty funny in places too. The cliffhanger at the end of this last chapter though, it caught me offguard...but I guess that's what a cliffhanger is for, so excellent work. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [13 Nov 10] • Not Rated
It started out kinda slow, but I'm glad I hung in and kept reading, because this is a perfect example of how Andrew could be redeemed, while staying completely in character.
Great work, and I can hardly wait to see exactly what Andrew has to say to the First, next! ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [12 Nov 10] • Not Rated