Um, in chapter 11/10? (I don't know if I should use the site's numbering or yours) McGee says Jesse disappeared in 1996, In chapter 5/4? Jessica says he died last year, and in the chapter headings it says it's 2007. Is this a possible time-line error? Other than that the fic is great thank you for writing it.

Edit: also in chapter 21/20? Willow says it's almost summer break, if this is season two what happened to angel loosing his soul?

I liked this story a lot and will probably reread it after a year or so. Most really good stories are just as good the second time around. I thought your action scenes were good, maybe not fantastic, but good, readable material that conforms to your style of writing.

I've never even seen an episode of NCIS, but I have read several Fan Fiction stories crossover with BtVS and your portrayal seems to match with the other stories I've read. You portrayal of Willow was absolutely great.
Thanks for sharing.

I think your portrayal of Ira and Sheila Rosenberg was spot on. They never cared about Willow, just their jobs. Willow should have been taken from them years ago by social services, but then again ... government has never been good at their job, just look at the mess Obama and congress have done. Almost 17 trillion in debt and giving all that money to people who don't work, just do drugs and are basically scumbags.
Oops getting off track here. Would serve them right if they were prosecuted and sent to prison for a few years.
Good Job on this story so far and I'll bet the rest is just as good.

Very interesting ending for this fic. Glad that it all turned out okay.

I just found this story and have spent the last three days reading and I have this story has been a joy to read it is well written and most definitely a story I will read over and over again

I have spent the last couple of evenings reading this from beginning to end. I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Bravo!

One word "BRAVO"

thank you for a fine read.

Awesome story....hadn't been on in a while so I'm just now getting to read the rest. Loved it! :)

Thank you for the story :)

That's basically the first thing that came into my mind, I just wanted to thank you for writing. I really liked the way you finished it, it feels complete. Every t crossed and every i dotted, no plots running around unaccounted for. I just liked the way the epilogue bound it all together, so... thanks!

Bravo!!! Well done!!!!
I have really enjoyed reading your story!!!
A little sad that it has come to an end, though.

I'm so sad it's over, but the ending was great. I even liked the Willow/Xander pairing. Oddly enough that was the ship that sucked me into reading fanfiction.

I love the idea of the two of them as MIBs, and what a nice surprise for Gibbs and team.

I am curious as to whether or not Willow and Xander managed their road trip to D.C. or if they returned home to Sunnydale after they broke down in Oxnard.

I do hope you do another BtVS/NCIS Willow-centric story sometime soon, even if it's a completely new concept. I love reading about those two worlds together.

Keep up the great work. Thanks for writing. Take care.

And so it ends. Well, it seems the injuries were overcome and the permanent damage relatively minor. Good to see Willow is a part of the Scooby gang, even if she did not hook up with Tara. A little distacne from Xander might have helped them both.

Agents in black indeed...

Thanks for writing

Wow. This is an amazing fic. I am often annoyed by epilogues, but it is readily apparent that this is the way this fic was meant to end.

Also, although it took a few readings to hear his voice, your Fornell is excellent.

Loved the story. I hope one day you might decide to do a sequel. Would be great reading about Xan and Willow working with the DC alphabet types.