im really in love with this story! corey is just so cute, and he and xan are so alike!^^ im also diggin' the xan and spikeness, its so sweet i just wanna scream at willow and buffy to neverfind out and/or ruin it! i'll be looking forward to the next chapter!^^
Review By [noirekitsune] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Love Xander stories. So good to read one where he is the father to a child who had the same start of his abused upbringing, and is determined to do the opposite of his parents.
The writing is great & dialogue well written. Well done!! Looking forward to more chapters.
Comments from author:
Thank you! This is definitely my most serious attempt at writing, and I've worked pretty hard to keep the mood away from my normal comedic style. There's another chapter written (can be found on my lj, ij or aff.net) but my numbers on xovers isn't high enough here yet *lol* will have it up in a few days if all goes well. I'm so glad you're enjoying this one. *hug*
Review By [jules] • Date [17 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
This adorable. I love Corey he's so cute! I wants to cuddles him mucho! LOL
Comments from author:
Yeah, he's a little bit of special, ain't he? This story is probably my most serious work, ever. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Please continue to let me know what you think!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [16 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Thank you very much. This one is probably the toughest for me to write, dealing with a damaged child. I hope to be relaying the drama without too much of the horror. Glad you've liked my tale so far.
Review By [ferball] • Date [6 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
A very well written emotional story but I am disappointed to find the unannounced beginnings of a slash relationship.
Comments from author:
Actually, it's classified as a slash story, and mentioned in the Pairings part of Chapter 1 - but I'm so used to writing Spike/Xander that maybe I forget... not everyone knows what "Spander" means. Sorry about that! For what it's worth, the first 5 chapters are totally gen and some of my best work. If you'd rather skip the male/male interaction (which will be minimal for another few chapters), you won't lose most of the plot. Thanks for reading, and reminding me to clarify the pairing.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]