i really like this, hope there's more of this story line to come. spike's got riddick's interest in xander up and xander's little freak out was priceless! omg the "not screaming like a girl" bit was hilarious. great job :D
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [13 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finish to Start" from malchance
Review:
This story begs for a sequel. I would love to read more.
Review By [malchance] • Date [11 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finish to Start" from Almadynis
Review:
Funny! Hope to read more soon.
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [21 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finish to Start" from lothlorien
Review:
This is just lovely. Please write the next part soon
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [16 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I like the premise of this story, so I will definitely be tracking! Riddick is a surprise with how fast he learns and adapts. Then again, he is a survivor. Part of that is being able to adapt to any situation he finds himself in. I like the spark of interest I see too.
Comments from author:
In my world *snicker*, the "common" language in CoR-verse is derived from English. Several centuries away, but in his travels, surely Riddick's come across some isolated communities that have used a close version of it. The adaptibility surely comes in handy as well. Glad you liked this, and thanks for making some of the same conclusions I did. Hope you enjoy where it'll go!
Review By [kayron] • Date [6 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
ähm... is this everything? The end is very sudden.
~Mamo~
Comments from author:
It's the first story in a series. I wanted to put it forward to see how many people on this site would read it - after all, not everyone likes male/male slash, or Riddick, Spike, Xander or any combination of the three. Yes, there is more to it. I'm in the middle of #3 actually, waiting on the 2nd to come back from a quick beta-read. Hope to have it posted tonight sometime. Other than "the end is very sudden"... did you like it? *lol*