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Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Reinforcement" from shadowflame
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Nice idea! I've seen some Harry raised by the Scoobies (or some variation of the members) but not by the McClay family--the sane ones, of course, although for that matter, I haven't seen him raised by the canon McClays either...but that would have been essentially the Dursleys with two people who actually liked him, so....
Hum, so will Harry go to Hogwarts in ten years? How would a more confident Tara affect events in Buffy? And even if her mother dies in your version, I assume Severus would take care of Tara and Harry, so she'd have a support system...
Review By [shadowflame] • Date [26 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Reinforcement" from Vickzie
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Brilliant story so far, hope you update more
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Reinforcement" from WolfWriter
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It's been over a year since the last update.

Still having issues with real life?
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [15 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Reinforcement" from (Current Donor)justjoanjm
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Well that was an unexpected revelation--the pregnancy, I mean. Good story.
Review By [(Current Donor)justjoanjm] • Date [21 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Reinforcement" from organicmagic
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I'm liking this so far, I am a sucker for fics that expand on Tara's character and she is pretty perfect as a big sister figure for Harry.
Review By [organicmagic] • Date [24 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Reinforcement" from Geyer
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Interesting, and very twisty indeed. Having Snape take on the role of protector for Naunine and her children is a great idea, especially if/when her ex and sons track them down, and if he's in Northern California, he's less likely to get involved with Voldemort. The new baby... Hmm. Assuming someone from the BtVS universe, I'm leaning toward Xander, since his parents apparently didn't take very good care of him, although Faith's childhood wasn't very good either. Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm working on the next couple of scenes now, but having issues with something. Damn Randall anyway. Not telling who the baby is, but both characters you've mentioned will join the party eventually.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Reinforcement" from LordSia
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Now, wouldn't it be terribly appropriate if this "Amy" person turned out to be a- what's the euphemism of choice? "Denizen of the Dark"? "Hostile Subterranean"?
You get the point.
Great fic. Now update!
Comments from author:
Sorry for being late with the updates - I'm stuck entertaining out-of-towners before Thanksgiving. Will post when I get the chance *blah*

As for your questions, well, they sound like fun ideas *lol*
Review By [LordSia] • Date [22 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Reinforcement" from DarkFaerieYumi
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I wasn't calling you a poophead! LOL I was calling Tara's dad a poophead. LOL
Comments from author:
Was hoping you'd say that *rofl* And yeah, he's a nasty piece of work. He'll get a bit of payback eventually though, have no fear on that account.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [16 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Reinforcement" from DarkFaerieYumi
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Poophead.
Comments from author:
Uh, excuse me? Is that for leaving it as I did, or some derogatory remark I should maybe take offense to? *lol*
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Reinforcement" from eriktheviking
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A real surprise at the family's developments and I sincerely hope Randall gets his comeuppance (paging Anyanka). Well done & thanks.
Comments from author:
Hmm, I hadn't thought of Anyanka... but there's room for her to settle the bastard *if* Nana wants to call her. Considering Nana's personality, I don't think it'll happen, but would be fun. Thanks for the review, and the vengence-y idea!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Reinforcement" from CrystalBlaze
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Come on, one mass alligator migration and Randall can get dragged under to soften up for Gator snacking.. *snort*

This is an interesting one! I'm interested in the mystery conception, and look forward with vast amusement to Potions Master Severus Snape learning the ins and out of Wicca Faith. He'll be more confused more often in the coming months than he has been his whole LIFE to date!
Comments from author:
Yeah, I'm thinking about converting Snape to Wicca, just to see if it can be done believably. Either way, this story's fun to write. Thanks!
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [11 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Reinforcement" from mithrilandtj
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Oooo
Snape as step-dad. COOL!!
Is he really going to be a permanent fixture? Will he legally adopt the kids?
I've read some really good stories with Snape as guardian/dad to Harry. I hope this will be one too!

PS: I'm glad that bastard of an ex is giving up on looking for them.
More please!
Comments from author:
No one said he'd be marrying Naunine! Not that he *won't* either, but hey, gotta keep ya guessing. More to come hopefully in the next couple of days. I'm working on Missing Persons right now, and it's giving me ... ISSUES!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [10 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Reinforcement" from Darksidhe
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Huh? Who? How? What? More!!!!!! (Pretty please).
Comments from author:
Thanks, I think... which questions would you like answered? More to come in the next few days.
Review By [Darksidhe] • Date [10 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Reinforcement" from WolfWriter
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Okay, Randall is a walking piece of crapola. And that's the kindest thing I can say about him here.

Naunine is well rid of this jerk; BTW, if her sons are wizards, have their magic bound so that they can't use it to find her.

I love it so far, I wonder who the baby's parents really are?

Xander and Faith, Buffy and Angel (please no), or Giles and Joyce?
Comments from author:
There will be no Angel or Buffy in this story - too early in the BtVS timeline for them to show up anyways, and since I can't stand Angel he will have no cameos *wicked laugh*

Nothing has been said about the sons' magical aptitude yet, so until further notice, consider them squibs. And yes, Randall is certainly a piece of work. Reminds me of my former step-father, actually.


Thanks for chiming in! Babe's identity will be revealed soonish.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [10 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Reinforcement" from schulyr
Review:
wonderful story, can't wait to read more
Comments from author:
Thanky, glad you're having fun with it.
Review By [schulyr] • Date [10 Nov 10] • Not Rated
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