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Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Chosen One" from Waverly
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This is fantastic so far, I can't wait to see what happens next. Wonderful job with characterization. Looking forward to some more BTVS elements in the plot now that she's been called :)
Review By [Waverly] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Chosen One" from spike
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Hmm somehow I see Faith saving Bobby's life from Dick Roman she is a slayer afterall. Anyway great story keep up the good work
Review By [spike] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Chosen One" from LadyHatshepsut
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Riding the Wheel of If* Supernatural/Buffy style. I love stories like this, where one seemingly minor change in the story can make such a huge difference. Giving Bobby a child that survives his wife's death; Faith raised by a loving father instead of an alky ho of a mother...what a huge difference it makes. Eagerly awaiting more. I want to see how this turns out.

*Riding the Wheel of If is a long Star Wars saga by MrsHamill at Mom's Kitchen where Obi-Wan goes on a multi-verse journey and finds out how one little thing can change everything after Qui-Gon dies. It made a big impression on me.
Review By [LadyHatshepsut] • Date [12 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Childhood Troubles" from LeaFairy
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Aw, poor Dean! *hugs* Great little moment between him and Faith though. Very touching. I love the thought of her, Dean and Sam and even Jo growing up together. I also loved Bobby's thoughts on Faith, trying to raise her right while still hunting, John and his less than desired (crappy) parenting, the boys and everything in between. Nicely done.

Great chapter, I look forward to reading more! Sorry it took me so long to read/review though :(
Comments from author:
dont worry about it its taken me TOO long to finally update this thing.... which i made myself do today.... so hopefully u still like it. haha
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [18 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Childhood Troubles" from BritneyandJacob
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Excellent chapter. I love it. Please continue.
Review By [BritneyandJacob] • Date [27 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Roadhouse Blues" from LeaFairy
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Very interesting idea! I just love Bobby and him as Faith's father is wicked awesome :) Great job so far, I look forward to reading more!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [23 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Roadhouse Blues" from MercyJones
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Love the idea and definitely curious how it's going to progress. Love the origin story for Bobby too! Keep up the good work!
Review By [MercyJones] • Date [1 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Roadhouse Blues" from (Past Donor)akat
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I *love* Bobby! You have a great setup here. I love the way you're filling in Bobby's past after his wife's death. I can't wait to see where you're going to go from here!
Review By [(Past Donor)akat] • Date [3 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Roadhouse Blues" from MBB
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I like the idea you give in the intro, and then you announce that you will go AU anyway, and I don't understand why. If you're not starting off with canon Faith, and she's not going to grow up to be like Faith, why bother using Faith? Why not an OC that got called in stead of Faith - or better, why not write the fic you discribe in your intro with the similar people from the show?
Comments from author:
i said in the beginning that this was going to be AU and that this Faith will be different, she isn't going to go psycho killer like the S3 Faith did... she'll still have the killer instinct and be wicked with the blade, but i have made it clear that this Faith will be MY faith, and i have it being FAITH because the scooby clan WILL be showing up eventually in this fic, just so u know.... ;)
Review By [MBB] • Date [3 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Roadhouse Blues" from AllenPitt
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I'm hoping events follow the show fairly close, but then maybe post Sunnydale collapse, Faith finds Bobby again?
Comments from author:
this will be happening in the supernatural verse mostly, when faith actually gets called, then perhaps some visit to Sunnydale will be made, but she'll be nothing like how she was in the show when it comes to the mayor---that much i can tell u, will she and buffy be friends? probably not, Faith will have been training since a young age, Buffy at only 15... yes we will meet giles, wesley, and so on and so forth but the events in season 3 will be different.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from supernaturalfanatic
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Hmm, so will she grow up as a hunter, as well, in an AU verse? Or will she still somehow become the Faith we know on BtVS? I can't see Bobby giving her up, though, without a fight. Even if she did get placed in Boston, he'd be there with her, in the shadow at least, watching out for her.
Review By [supernaturalfanatic] • Date [27 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from ChaosJunkie
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I love the premise for this story!! It's amazing. I hope you change your mind and make it Faith/Dean though ;) Other than that, I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Review By [ChaosJunkie] • Date [22 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Missingviolet
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oooh! extremely sad beginning! hope it gets better!
Review By [Missingviolet] • Date [10 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from AllenPitt
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Great premise. So.... Faith ended up growing up in Boston, with an abusive /neglectful mother & no father, so 'something happened' not long after this? Loses her somehow or gives her up for adoption? Then hopefully reconnects when she's in Sunnydale but before she joins the mayor?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Faithlessness
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Wow, I can,t wait for the next update. This is intriguing to say the least.
Review By [Faithlessness] • Date [7 Nov 10] • Rating [1 out of 10]
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