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Review of chapter "Chapter I" from AtotheM
Review:
That was great! Captured both of them really well in a short amount of time. And now I kind of want french fries...on top of wanting to read more ;)
Comments from author:
Thanks! There might be more someday, when inspiration strikes.

Thanks for reading it :D
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter I" from MysteryladyTx
Review:
LMAO! Poor Jack! that was AWESOME!

THANKS:"D
Review By [MysteryladyTx] • Date [4 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter I" from spk
Review:
Oh...I so love this pairing. Great job with the characterizations. I really hope you'll put them together again in something. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter I" from hedu
Review:
Love it! Hope you still have plans to write a sequel.
Review By [hedu] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter I" from serenityselena
Review:
oh my ...
that was awesome .... very amusing too ...
too bad for Jack ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [11 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter I" from manic
Review:
I really enjoyed this. And it was so funny at the end that Jack lost her number.
Review By [manic] • Date [27 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter I" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Now that was just wrong! Leaving us hanging like that. Fun read. A sequel would add to the fun. *hopeful
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter I" from allaire
Review:
I'd like to chime in with the others here in the dema--, ah, that is, *request* for a sequel. Buffy/Jack is pretty much my crossover OTP, and I like how you wrote them.
Comments from author:
There seem to be a lot of...requests for a sequel. We'll see....we'll see...

I agree that Buffy and Jack are perfect together, thanks for the review.
Review By [allaire] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter I" from Gideon
Review:
A nice fun light piece. I'm sure they will meet again sooner or later - it is just a question of whether he will be at work or if she will!
Or maybe they could meet up again at some swanky military reception. I bet that would be funny!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I actually have some ideas, we'll see if something good will come out of them.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter I" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Well, why the frilly heck did he take it off-world with him?! Here's hoping she feels feminist enough to look him up when he doesn't call...just to see if maybe something like this happened. Or there's always the less obvious approach of braving the perky girl and going back to the bar in case he comes back again. Choices, choices.
Comments from author:
A lot can happen when it comes to those two! Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter I" from danielbuffyfan
Review:
I loved this. This needs a sequel. Please....
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [danielbuffyfan] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter I" from aveave
Review:
Great story. I hope you will write a sequel.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. There might be a sequel somewhere inside my brain, I'll just have to find time to write it down.
Review By [aveave] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter I" from Lotusja
Review:
Lovely Story.. I would like it to continue. Anything with Jack and Buffy as friends, lover is my cup of tea.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I think Jack and Buffy make a great couple.
Review By [Lotusja] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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