Review of chapter "A Night Out Gone Wrong" from Blackett
interesting start. I'm surprised that there are not more BDB and DH stories on this site.
Review By [Blackett
] • Date [11 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Goodbye Sunnydale, Hello New York" from Xeelia
I really like this so far! One thing though, for a section of it you switch from third to first person prescriptive. Can't wait for chapter 2!!!
Review By [Xeelia
] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Goodbye Sunnydale, Hello New York" from Nightscream
Yay! Finely a response to my challenge! Its looks good so far, I can't wait until you introduce the Brothers. :D
Review By [Nightscream
] • Date [9 Nov 10] • Not Rated