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Review of chapter "11. End of the Line" from branz
Review:
Quite good, only wish Fred eventually regains the full measure of her powers.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it. I'm really glad someone still reads my stuff. I am rewriting it and its sequel. So stay tuned (or don't, it's a long process)
Review By [branz] • Date [12 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11. End of the Line" from Yodes
Review:
Loved this.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Yodes] • Date [4 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "11. End of the Line" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
The idea of Fred just ditching the rest of the Angel Investigations team doesn’t quite fit for me- and the timing is a bit confusing for Fred as well-, but the concept of her working for Tony Stark is still interesting, as she finally gets a chance to REALLY use her science-based skills on a regular basis rather than just being called upon in exceptional circumstances.

Plus, I have to admire your new take on the Hammer storyline; not only did you give him an interesting past history with Fred, but his role in Illyria’s new origin was rather good (As well as the origin itself being very comic-book-esque; the hero develops powers due to exposure to a unique set of conditions that would have almost certainly killed anyone else exposed to them and are all-but-impossible to replicate).

All in all, a simple writing style, but an interesting bit of work as a concept; keep it up!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [28 Oct 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11. End of the Line" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
very good read, thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [21 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11. End of the Line" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Looking forward to the sequel!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [20 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "11. End of the Line" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [20 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "11. End of the Line" from deathgeonous
Review:
Nice fic. I just reread the entire thing, and am now asking myself, 'Why isn't this fic on my rec's list yet?' I will now rectify that mistake. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thank you for rec-cing it.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [20 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "11. End of the Line" from CageFire
Review:
Nice end to this story of the series. Now I have to read the next story.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. I'll settle for a nice end. Better than a bad end in my book.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [20 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "11. End of the Line" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Excellent story and very nice work with the Fred and Iron Man dynamic.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad to hear that.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [19 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the Public Eye" from SpacedCadet
Review:
“It’s easy. Not many people should be themselves when it comes to the media. But you’re exactly the type of person people want. You’re confident in your abilities but you don’t hold it above anyone else. You know you’ve been gifted with a great gift and you want to help everyone you can. Add to that a feeling of self-accomplishment. You don’t want to be all over the world building these villages for the people who need them; you want to provide them with everything you need to do it themselves. You want to build more than villages, you want to build pride,” Tony said


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Comments from author:
Oh, man! That is far back. Chapter 2 if I'm not mistaken. I have to say I won't be fixing it on line, but I'm definitely editing the original copy. Thousands of people have read that (including me and I AM an editor) and missed that. Congratulations.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the Public Eye" from SpacedCadet
Review:
everything you need to do it themselves

Shouldn't that be everything **they** need to do it themselves ?
Comments from author:
I thank you for the correction, but I have no idea where that is.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10. Days Like These" from TinMan
Review:
I like how you've incorporated the Marvel movieverse with the Buffy&Angle verse. Everything just seems to fit together the way you've layer it out.

I'm looking forward to the upcoming battle, looks like it should be awesome.

How far will you integrate the various marvel movies into the story? By all indications, at the very least you're including The Avengers. Which means that the events around Thor and Hulk will occur either on screen or off. But will Spider Man ever be involved? for example. How far will you integrate the marvel movieverse?
Comments from author:
Well, I'm kinda making the hulk not exist at all (after all, Illyria is one hell of a powerhouse and monochromatic). Things will take their time to evolve and I'm going to kinda just pull from Marvel itself after a while. So many characters don't have (or have poor) representation in the movies so I'm running with it how I feel is best. The events of the newest Spider-Man movie will come into play but it will be in a much larger, much more involved universe.
Review By [TinMan] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10. Days Like These" from CageFire
Review:
Hmm, this is actually a really awesome fic. I'm really looking forward to reading more. I hope a new chapter comes soon. :)

I kinda like how you gave fred illyria's powers without, you know, destroying her soul. Also some of the differences in events were interesting. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! That means a lot to me. I'm working on the new chapter right now.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10. Days Like These" from dwnstr
Review:
Good story, just started reading it and was really impressed. I wish you would have kept Illyria as an Old God, but either way story is still great. First Fred story I've read that I really liked, seen some very good Illyria fics, but there doesn't seem to be a lot out there focusing on Fred.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I always enjoy hearing that.
Review By [dwnstr] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10. Days Like These" from deathgeonous
Review:
Coll chapter, thanks for it, and bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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