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Review of chapter "Monstrous" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Well done tragedy. I don't usually read these, being a happy fic kind of gal, but sometimes I'll dip in. This was well worth the read. Thank you.
Comments from author:
I'd sort of forgotten I'd written this one. Glad its a one-shot, its super dark.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [2 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Monstrous" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Nice.

Good choice using the Harry Potter verse. The memories-floating-in-pools feels very appropriate :D
Comments from author:
:)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [16 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Monstrous" from Tanydwr
Review:
Wow! Much darker than I envisaged when I made the challenge, but well-written and with some wonderful additional concepts in there. I love the 'monstrous' aspect. A bit of Nietzche for inspiration?

Great work, and it's great to have a response to my challenge!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [15 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Monstrous" from Shadowcub
Review:
This is what happens when you get friendly with the
enemy.
Comments from author:
no kidding!
Review By [Shadowcub] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Monstrous" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
This tale is as dark as it gets.

Thank you for having the courage to depict it.
Comments from author:
I don't know about courage in relatively anonymous writing, but thank you.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Monstrous" from FireWolfe
Review:
Angel and his family made her a monster. She did her job. It's sad she paid so high a price for it. It is a well crafted fic however.

Fire
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Monstrous" from winddancer
Review:
I agree with Gideon, a dark fic and masterfully told. Buffy always did, and in all ways, fight the Slayer Spirit, especially where Angel was concerned. I can not say that I am sorry for how she dispatched the beast but I suppose it says something about me that I have no feelings but a small smirk at the end.
Comments from author:
There's always interest in seeing what happens when someone gets pushed "over the edge". I've seen a lot of fics where Buffy becomes a sad little girl and cries and mopes...I didn't think thats what would happen when a supernatural boogeyman gets pushed too hard...I wrote the story based on the idea that when the boogeyman gets pushed to hard it does what it does best...
Review By [winddancer] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Monstrous" from Gideon
Review:
Well you certainly chose the right title for this one. You bring across the darkness inherent in the Slayer very well, something that Buffy struggled against all through the series. If she ever gave into it I could see something like this happening.
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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