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Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Hecatonchires
Review:
What's the original source for this tale?
Comments from author:
A story called, 'The Man who Would Be King, By Rudyard Kipling...at least I think it is, I've only ever seen the film of the same name.

DaveT.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Mcspender
Review:
Damn, poor Faith, lost in time and robbed of her happiness.
Ya know, I think Faith should've told the priests about the Slayer and her divine duty to kill demons, that would have been helpful, but in the end, it didn't matter.
Being the Slayer was what her saving grace, but it wasn't enough =(.
Cool fic dude =).
See ya!!.
Comments from author:
Cheers, Fate is a harsh mistress.

DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Nasty - but inevitable, I suppose.
Comments from author:
Well, that's how the film ended.

On the other hand I've written five stories in this series (I think) four of them have had 'Happy ever after' endings for Faith. She was bound to come a cropper at some point.

DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Mcspender
Review:
A nice bit of bloody fun exercise to raise the spirits to godhood levels =D.
Damn, the masons are really everywhere, maybe I should really feel paranoid??.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
You're not paranoid if they're really after you!

I remember one place I lived, the Masonic Lodge was right next to the police station...bit of a give away really!

DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [27 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from Hecatonchires
Review:
Faith seemed particularly bloodthirsty this chapter
Comments from author:
I wrote her as the unreformed Faith who's probably got even more 'unreformed'! You can have more fun with her that way!

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from RafMereC
Review:
Screwed if you do, and screwed if you don't.

Nice addition.

Raf
Comments from author:
You're not wrong...thing are really starting to go down hill now!

DaveT.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from Mcspender
Review:
Ya know, I that both Danny-o and Peachy-o are quite morons, and the only one making some sense is Faith!.
What a world =D.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Danny and Peachy are basically 'conmen' out for profit and their motivations are coloured by this. The sensible thing to do would be to take what they'd got and head for the hills.

But when do people in stories do the sensible thing?

Like, never!

DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cnapter Four." from RafMereC
Review:
Looks like you've got another winner.

Raf
Comments from author:
Thank-you very much!

DaveT.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [24 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cnapter Four." from Mcspender
Review:
See?? That's what I like about Faith, she knows how to deal with a bad hand, with style and elegance.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
That's our girl!

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [23 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cnapter Four." from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
I suspect that they are now VERY badly screwed - it's a long time since I read the original story so I forget how it plays out.
Comments from author:
You've read the original! I've read a lot of Kipling's short stories but never this one, I've only seen the film (one of my favourites). Have to say it all goes slightly down hill from this point on.

DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [23 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from Mcspender
Review:
When good ole Daniel boy entered the room, ya made remember this little song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gaVc2krA2jo

Dude's really a moron :P.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Cheers,

DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [21 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from Mcspender
Review:
“Sensible girl is our Faith,” Daniel observed.
“You’re right,” agreed Peachy, “I wouldn’t trust us either if I was ‘er!”.
Those two guys are really something, oh yeah =S.

Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [19 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
Cool begining dude, cool.
I wonder if Faith can become a better person in this timeline=).
See ya!!.
Comments from author:
Wait and see.

DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [18 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Interesting idea - one question, how does Faith know where people were standing in Kipling's office? And since when were women allowed to join the Freemasons?
Comments from author:
“...and Daniel stood here. Or so they told me later. Remember?”

They told her about it in her past and your future, did I imply that Faith became a Mason? Again she found out a lot from being around Danny and Peachy.

More importantly, what happened to that nasty knife wound in her stomach? OOOPS! It must have been healed when she was transported....honest!

DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [18 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from batzulger
Review:
Good Show Sir!

Now I'm going to have to do a Talbot Mundy cross...
Comments from author:
After saying 'Who?' I did a quick web search. Never heard of the writer but I have heard of his stories, wasn't King of the Khyber Rifles a film? I'm sure I must have seen it.

Yes, a bit of the old Imperial adventuring, it was bound to happen eventually.

You know I have vague plans for a 'Carry on up the Khyber' xover at some point...perhaps...maybe.

DaveT.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [18 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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