Review of chapter "Personal Demon" from ZhannRose
Good story. I've never watched Vampire Diaries but I was easily able to follow the story line here. It was well thought out. It makes me want to know what happens when Damon sees Willow again though.
Review By [ZhannRose
] • Date [27 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Personal Demon" from xanderfan
This was really good and such an intriguing idea, I loved it. I can't wait to read the sequel.
Review By [xanderfan
] • Date [18 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Personal Demon" from Luna
Words cannot express my love for this fic!!!
Not only is the plot intriguing and unique, but you write incredibly well.
Review By [Luna
] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Personal Demon" from LeaFairy
Oh wow, this was completely amazing! The whole plot with Damon was truly incredible! I really loved your AU take on Willow and Xander and Sunnydale in general with no Buffy or any Slayer showing up. The changes in both Willow and Xander after that faithful night were very well done also. I loved them leaving Sunnydale early, Willow's standing up to her 'parents' and them both trying to find ways to protect themselves from Damon and vampires in general. Poor Willow with Damon having marked her and forcing her to stay a virgin for him. *shivers* Even more fucked up was after all that he did, he didn't even remember her (and Xander) till later...
I was kinda hoping Willow would've learned some witchcraft or something like it though so when she ran into Damon again she would have had a chance, even if it was so he couldn't mess with her mind anymore. *shrugs* Oh well.
The twist at the end with the open ending was freaking fantastic as well! I'm so hoping you'll write a sequel in the future! Damon definitely needs to be brought down a peg or two, he got away with screwing with their lives wayyy to easy! *grins*
Anyways, this story kicked ass! Thanks for writing!!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback! I did consider Willow getting into magic, but Isobel didn't seem like the one to get her there. Maybe in the sequel.
Review By [LeaFairy
] • Date [25 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Personal Demon" from Nightscream
oh...My...GAWD!! That was hot! I loved it! I'm assuming you are using the television show and not the book series for reference? If so I really hope you do continue this fic. I would love to see Willow and Xander move with Alric to Mystic Falls and get meshed in with whats going on there currently.
Comments from author:
Yup, definitely the TV show. And Willow and Xander won't be going with Alaric per se . . . but they are definitely staying close in touch. That's all I'm going to say about the sequel . . . other than Road Trip to Duke goes a bit different in my world.
Review By [Nightscream
] • Date [24 Nov 10] • Not Rated