You know I wish that I had Jessie's Girl! In this case, William's girl. Not going to happen Angel. You need to find a lady of your own.
Review By [Harry] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Have Him Home by Midnight" from Harry
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Angel, you have to let Connor sow his oats! That means staying out somewhat late with Ace. Besides, with Faith watching them, nothing will happen. (WHAT AM I SAYING! LIAM, GET HIM HOME NOW!)
Review By [Harry] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Connor, I know you're trying to work your way through this world, but trust Ace when she is like this. She is a lady who will love you, if you give her a chance. And if you need military backup, she can do that too!
Review By [Harry] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I can see these two hooking it up. Just remind Angel NOT to get too overprotective of his son. Ace can handle herself. I know. I have ALL the McCoy New Adventure books. Ace can handle herself, very easily thank you!
Review By [Harry] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter ""Just Tell Me Where to Shoot"" from Harry
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Oh Lord! Talk about a pair of demolition experts! If you need something demolished, and it has demons or Daleks, call these two! They'll take care of matters for you.
Review By [Harry] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where My Heart Will Take Me" from Harry
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It makes sense for the Doctor to sing to Faith, with what was happening.
Review By [Harry] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I wonder what's going to be freakier; Angel at the idea that his son is now dating, Ace when she learns just how 'unique' her new boyfriend is, the Doctor at the fact that the woman he considers a daughter is at that stage of her life again (After the loss of her last serious relationship in the New Adventures series), or Faith'spossible reaction to the discovery that the Doctor's a father figure to someone around her age...
Keep up the good work; should be interesting to see how THAT twist works out!
Comments from author:
Thanks. It will be fun writing the family comedy / drama that will ensue.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [24 Nov 10] • Not Rated