Although outside my normal fare, this has long been a favorite of mine. I reread it occasionally when it appears in the listings again as it is just that good. Please, come back to it someday?!?
Review By [nerfherder] • Date [26 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I have spent the last couple of days reading this story. I can always tell that it is a great story by whether or not I walk away from it and am still thinking about what might happen next. I would go to bed thinking about the story and it's characters. It drew me in, kept my attention, and left me wanting more whenever I had to stop reading for some reason. There were some spelling/grammar mistakes, but those can be overlooked if the story is good. I would love to see this story finished out. If not, thank you for a good read.
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [13 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I enjoyed the heck out of this story and that surprised me. Gender Benders are not usually my cup of tea, but this was hilarious! Please, continue this!
Review By [nerfherder] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I have to say that I am just blown away by this story. Generally I try to avoid gender-flips in fanfiction because, well, either the author doesn't handle it well, or the character winds up adapting to their situation so quickly that they become almost unrecognisable to the original, but the way you've handled this, with Xander gradually making small accommodations whilst remaining adamant about his inner gender, retaining his core character, is simply astounding and I dearly hope to see more soon.
Review By [Klimmatt] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I just re-read this story and it is still as good as ever. I think your writing definitely shows flair. You've treated the changes to Xander in a very thoughtful manner while maintaining a light atmosphere. I hope you will come back to this story soon.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Good story! I read this a few weeks ago and realized I hadn't reviewed it.
I like the way you handled Xander's ambiguity about the changes, he loves the powers and has begun adapting to the change of sex over the course of the story so far, well handled.
You also did a very good job with Xander keeping secrets from Tony/Iron Man and why he needs to do so.
Good story, I hope you continue it.
Review By [tchizek] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
A nice chapter. I like this crossover ^-^ Poor Xander, getting a complete make over after only a few months as a girl... hell I'm a girl and I wouldn't be comfortable with such a change. I like the romance ^-^ Good luck with the next chapter. I hope that you will continue writing.
Review By [greysh] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
A nice chapter. I like this crossover ^-^ Poor Xander, getting a complete make over after only a few months as a girl... hell I'm a girl and I wouldn't be comfortable with such a change. I like the romance ^-^ Good luck with the next chapter. I hope that you will continue writing.
Review By [greysh] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I'm sorry to hear that you've had some negative responses to this story, and judging buy the update history that may have soured you on this fic. At least in my opinion this is a great story, full of wit, and depth, I have greatly enjoyed it and hope you find the time, or the will to continue it.
Review By [Duquette] • Date [26 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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