Review of chapter "Prologue" from Lilkitsu
I like the premise, though Faith doesn't use much Bostonian lingo... tenses are a bit off, the story could really use a beta to help everything mesh and flow better, but other than those little things, I really enjoy it. I look forward to seeing where it all ends up!
Review By [Lilkitsu
] • Date [1 Feb 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]