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Review of chapter "Private Amy" from clarityfades
Review:
Love "Magic Boot Camp"! I think it's a great punishment. :)
Comments from author:
And now maybe she'll be a good witch instead of an evil one.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Private Amy" from TwoBlackDragons
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I wasn't all that fond of the 1st one in this series because of Cordy's and Joyce's deaths. Still read it though.


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“So we have [you] friends teach her?” James asked.


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Comments from author:
Maybe they didn't both have to die, but in a way I didn't want Cordy to have to suffer the guilt of being partially responsible for Joyce's death. She can't feel guilty if she's already dead.

Fixed. Thanks.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [8 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Private Amy" from JacobPhoenix
Review:
very nice sequel to your other story hope you can keep it up
Comments from author:
Not sure if I'll write more in this timeline, but who knows? As for other 'consequence' fics, probably...when I'm feeling annoyed with the character in question.
Review By [JacobPhoenix] • Date [1 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Private Amy" from Gideon
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Yeah, that will show her! Or leave her bitter and looking for revenge. Hopefully the good spells she learns will help with that.
Comments from author:
I'm choosing to believe that she feels bad about the results and wants to make amends. The reason she kept going on the show was because she didn't have to face consequences until it was too late; she was already too deep into the magick at that point. That and she already lost 3 years of her life because she was a rat all that time. At least this way, she's able to get her GED and learn positive things instead of eating pellets and running on a wheel.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Nov 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Private Amy" from BlueEyedJedi
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Xanderphile here, however your logic is spot on concerning responsiblity. This story is walking new ground, the motivations are believable. So carry on.

Fan not fanatic
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you're proud of being a Xanderphile, just like I'm proud of being a Buffyphile.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [27 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Private Amy" from FireWolfe
Review:
Yes this was really good. I think Amy at least understand that there are consequenses for her misjudgements and arrogance. I am glad she is paying for it and learning. It might have changed a lot of things if Giles had helped both Amy and Willow after that Love spell. Or even after Amy's mom tried to kill her. Maybe if he had stepped in and helped both girls a lot of bad things could have been avoided.
Fire
Comments from author:
That is one of Giles' big mistakes; not making sure the girls got the magick training they needed to respect the craft. I'm not sure if Joss didn't think about it, or if he liked the idea of wild, untrained magick users because of the havoc they'd cause.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [27 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Private Amy" from Kimera
Review:
I don't mind if you write a story about having Xander pay for his mistakes. The only think I would like to see is that all the Scoobies pay for their mistakes, as I don't think it is fair or right to just single out one person to have to pay for their mistakes. Oh, yeah it has to be about something they actually did, not just something you invented for the purpose of your stories.

VR/ Kimera
Comments from author:
Umm, why are you leaving this review on a story about Amy and the punishment she faced for the love spell? And by the way, I didn't change what Xander did in canon; I only changed what happened as a result of it.
Review By [Kimera] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Private Amy" from texaswookie
Review:
Darn and there I was thinking Salem was going to have a furry friend. So what next the My Will be done spell? For Willow.
Comments from author:
You know, I hadn't even considered Salem's punishment. It's kinda gruesome when you think of how Buffy was injured though. Maybe a different animal. Would Willow have gotten mixed up in magick if she didn't have to do the ensoulment spell? I suppose it could be a different timeline than this one.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Private Amy" from Harry
Review:
I just hope that Amy LEARNS from what she did! Her atttitude toward Cordy though, makes me thing that she hasn't learned all she needs to learn. If that is the case, then I see her going to the Dark Side of Magicks very easily and soon!
Comments from author:
Sorry, author error at work. I meant to say Amy's recklessness. Sometimes I hate pronouns.
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Private Amy" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
I liked the idea of the Sabrina boot camp :)
Comments from author:
Too bad Giles didn't have that option for Willow in season 6, huh?
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Private Amy" from RevDorothyL
Review:
A far kinder fate than letting Amy continue to become more and more twisted, as happened in canon.
Comments from author:
Yeah, maybe if Amy had to deal sooner, she wouldn't have gotten so twisted by magick abuse.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Nov 10] • Not Rated
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