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Review of chapter "ch 6" from batzulger
You know I want more of this one....
Review By [batzulger] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch 6" from NimbustheMariner
As understanding of character goes, I think it's spot on. Peter verges on suedom at points, but nothing terrible. The plot is interesting, the wands unusual - if vaguely sueish in their strangeness, but that too can pass. The only problem really is spelling, grammar and formatting, all of which are improving. I watch with interest. Oh, and is this the Ultimate Universe or 616? It's a little hard to tell.
Review By [NimbustheMariner] • Date [10 Dec 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from rmoni
Love this story. Hope you keep it going.
Review By [rmoni] • Date [23 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "ch 6" from Kensington
I just found this story to my pleasure.

I really like how you're emphasizing that Peter and Kitty are operating out of their comfort zones, away from adults that are supportive and instead restrictive.

Hopefully this story isn't incomplete and I hope to see a Chapter 7 sometime soon!
Review By [Kensington] • Date [13 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from WolfWriter
Just read the last chapter again. This thing is still a hoot and a half.

I hope that Stephen Strange shows up to engage them in a magical smackdown. He'd win, no doubt about it.

Heck, Baron Mordo would have no truck with these magical wannabes! Not to mention Morgana Le Fey laughing at the supposed superiority of the Wizarding World.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from SamDragon
If she tries the quill on Peter or Kitty she is going to be very sorry.I can't wait. :)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [23 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Doc
1) I'm surprised Peter didn't web Umbridges mouth shut

2) Peter had proven himself capable of escaping 12 Grimmauld place, avoiding capture by both the 'Greatest Wizard of the Modern Age' and one of the best Aurors out there, who is armed with a magic eye, and MacGonagall wonders if he can handle what he's getting into? I don't think the Ministry is the only ostridge here.

3) Dumbledore v Stephen Strange? My money's on the Doc. I'm half surprised they don't tell Doubledumb where the Eye is, just to teach him where on the food chain he and the rest of the Wizards sit, magically and politically. I doubt an attack like that would go over well with SHIELD.

4) Trying to attack Lockheed? Snivellus needs to quit while he still has a head. I almost hope he continues these little 'quiz's' with Peter. I doubt he'll know much about some of the higher end science Peter knows.

All around, good fun. I get the feeling things are going to get interesting if and when people actually learn WHY the duo is so good, or why they're so hostile against bigots. I can't wait to see what... Oh. the Blood Quill.

Blimey, this ain't gonna be pretty...
Review By [Doc] • Date [21 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Past Donor)gunsmith
I love this story! Could it be that maybe - just maybe - that Peter has a chance to be somewhat like Dr. Strange? The fact that Pete and Strange are sometimes parters as well as friends could open the way for Peter to be apprenticed to the Sorcerer Supreme once his time at Hogwarts is over or during the Summer. The fact that his wand can become a staff is could be your indication that it may be that way. Pete's fate in the wizarding world is very interesting... as for Harry's prophecy... wouldn't someone like Strange been able to have access since he has the Eye of Agamoto?

PS.. I would love to have Pete and Kitty kick Umbitch's ass all the way across the globe if given the right incentive.
Review By [(Past Donor)gunsmith] • Date [21 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from WolfWriter
This is a nice chapter. I'm looking forward to how these two react to the blood quill.

I guarantee that the damned thing gets snapped, and that Umbridge ends up hanging from the ceiling bound in Peter's webs or stuck with a powerful Sticking Charm.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [21 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShalaDakiri
Hey, I have to say, I like the version of Kitty you're using. Think Lockheed might help out with some pranking, give the students alibies? Considering the arrogance of most of the Wizarding adults, they probably wouldn't believe he's smart enough.

Edit: I could tell. That's probably my favorite version
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like Kitty here I based mine off the old Excalibur comics from the 90's.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from CrystalBlaze
In response to the guy that figured no-one would expect pranking assistance from Lockheed--simply not true.

Between Kneazles and House Elves, the wizarding world will believe a minidragon (as they would see him) could be an intelligent familiar.

The worst part is that Umbridge is prone to treat creatures like things, regardless of their intelligence, and honestly feels all magical power should solely be in the hands of Purebloods. She'd try to have Lockheed killed using any and no excuse.

That said, Dumbledore looks to be in his Buttinsky Mode. Me, I hope he gerts through into Peter's inner mind--and finds the Spider inside. The man deserves it.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [28 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from borgrabbit
An acknowledging haiku:

Fantastic story
Just now reaching chapter four
Muse be kind to thee
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [24 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from WolfWriter
I foresee this woman being stuck in a great many giant sized webs in her future.

Very nice update, I like it.

Have a Merry Christmas, and a Happy New Year.

I just thought of something; since Peter is now the Spider Avatar of both Science and Magic, does that mean he can control any kind of arachnid? Not just the little ones in the castle, but also the Acromantulas?

I kind of figured that Anansi, the Spider God would be getting involved with this kid at some point. Will he? That'd be a REAL kick.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [24 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from lunalurker
Very entertaining so far, and I'm a huge Kitty and Peter fan, so I can't wait to see how this develops. Thanks for writing!
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [21 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from RafMereC
Nice update
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [20 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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