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Review of chapter "Mother's milk is red today" from Gideon
Review:
Dawn should have known better than to become a cop. That was just asking for trouble. And if she can't call in her sister then she should have called in the local slayer group, this is the kind of theing she really should have backup for, and I don't mean Mulder! This story kinda reminded me of Dexter actually, I can just see Dawn being friends with Dexter's sister and finding him creepy.
Comments from author:
Then guess what is the idea for continuation... And what the drained body is...
Review By [Gideon] • Date [18 Jun 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mother's milk is red today" from (Current Donor)vladt
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very good read, thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [30 Nov 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mother's milk is red today" from PATM
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You better keep on with this story, you've left so many hints to expand on that it would be a crying shame if you don't. Dawn didn't want to call Buffy, I want to know why. Are those geek guys lone gunman of her own? Not enough Scully, she would be a great ally for Dawn to trip on Mulders psychology background. Oh yeah, "through her teeth, sweetly, that is... dropped that "r" you did.
Review By [PATM] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mother's milk is red today" from (Moderator)Ava
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I'm actually more interested in Dawn's back story as to why she became a cop versus knowing what the creature or person was that was doing the attacks. This does mesh with the concept of the first few seasons of X-Files, but the series did start to explain things and give reasons behind all the story arcs towards the end of it's run. Though personally I liked not knowing who, Mulder or Scully, was correct, but I can see where it would annoy some. All and all this was a nice little vintage.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mother's milk is red today" from poe
Review:
This was OK as a mood piece, but it really didn't go anywhere. If mood was what you were aiming at, well done; if not then a little back story or some character development would help out a lot.
Comments from author:
At the start I was aiming for more of a story, but then - as I began thinking about X-Files, where they never resolved anything - I decided to keep it this way. I may continue this in another story and explain more, though.
Review By [poe] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mother's milk is red today" from Thedruid
Review:
Uh,ok. Good story, though nothing really came of it. No surprises, no charcter development, and for those of us who don't know what the 'demon' was or may have been... we're lost.
Comments from author:
As I said, that's how I always felt about X-Files. I may expand on it though and explain what really happened (most probably in another story in this setting).
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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