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Review of chapter "Plan B" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
An idea that could have been silly in other hands is actually handled rather well here; congratulations.

The point of Buffy having spent some time wanting ‘out’ of the Slayer game initially eluded me, but the central premise was intriguing from the beginning, and her interaction with Darkwing and his family was simple but effective, to say nothing of the twist with the Slayer of Darkwing’s world to help in the fight against NegaBuffy.

Interesting touch with your introduction of the Slayer of Darkwing’s world- to say nothing of Willow’s prior contact with Morgana-, and the struggle against the Negas was certainly dramatic, particularly with Mindy’s sacrifice adding that extra emotional weight to the crisis.

It might have been a strange crossover, but it was definitely an enjoyable one to read; keep up the great work!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plan B" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
That was a fantastic conclusion! And, yes, I'm so happy that the sequel is my "fault". LOL. My favorite part of the "evening"? The DW inspired staking of Negabuffy. Puns will never be the same after this little experience of Buffy's :D Seriously, though, that was beautifully wrapped up, a great balance of Buffy/DW humor, drama, and bloodshed. You should be proud of this--perhaps it will inspire a new rise in BtVS/DWD crossovers? Who knows.

And you'll be happy to hear that this left me.... well.... thinking that I'd probably have fun in that rpg you're planning to start up :D
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [11 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plan B" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Compact timeline? Sweet. Helps save on anti-vampire sunlight.

Good Buffy battle speech ;)

Nice transfer home. Well executed.
Comments from author:
Sorry for the long wait for the reply. Thanks for the great review! I plan on getting chapter one of this one's sequel, called "Devil You Don't Know," out soon. Hope to see you there!
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [9 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Plan B" from Tempi
Review:
A great story and a very unusual crossover. Just the kind of weird ideas that the TtHM website is built on. I look forward to reading other stories by you.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I like to be the good kind of weird ;) Just so you know, I hope to have the first chapter of this one's sequel called, "Devil You Don't Know," out soon. Hope to see you there!
Review By [Tempi] • Date [8 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Problem Unsolved" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
Ohh, awesome chapter! Love how you turned the solution on its head. Can't wait to see how our heroes get out of this mess. I feel so sorry for them--it sucks to have a plan poop out like that, lol. Love how you wrote for NegaBuffy in this chapter. Deliciously evil chick. Can't wait for the conclusion!
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [3 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Problem Unsolved" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Nice turnabout. Good use of Lloyd :)

Ouch. That's a big swath of destruction. No wonder the Negaverse is wrecked...
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [28 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That Eureka Moment" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
The chapter title really cracked me up, even though the chapter itself was sad. You did a great job maneuvering the emotional rollercoaster. Well done--and I liked that you mentioned Kendra, too. Poor Dawn, blaming herself. Can't wait for more of this!
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What a Slayer Wants" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
Great chapter! Loved the fight scenes... Hunky demon #2 reminded me vaguely of someone...hmmm. lol. The devouring demon, bahahaha--is it sick that I kinda wanna draw Buffy fighting it?
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What a Slayer Wants" from QOShea
Review:
Happy Birthday!

Hope things get better for you.

Looking forward to seeing what Buffy REALLY wants.
Review By [QOShea] • Date [13 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death at a Factory" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
Oh noes! Very tragic, touching scene. Great job on this! There was a line I was going to quote back because I liked it so much, but I forgot it once tragedy struck :( Anyhow, I can't wait for more! I also can't wait to see how Buffy reacts to what just unfolded.
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "For Your Life" from JasonBarnett
Review:
The Fearsome Four should be pretty effective against negaBuffy at least. SOmeone could either bless Liquidator or pore a little holy water into him, and Bushroot can animate plants which leads to walking wooden stakes.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [24 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "For Your Life" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
Attack of the cliffy! Ok, maybe not a huge cliffy since we knew that soul-guy would probably ask for such, but still, it was very well written. Very intense. I loved this chapter :D Some great lines between Morgana and DW. And everyone was so in-character, especially when it came to dialogue from the DW verse. Oh, and may I say, any chance to hear from Spike makes me a happy camper, so thanks, hee.
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [24 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Piled Higher and Deeper" from Dragonelf
Review:
Nice chapter.

It will be interesting to see what will happen when they go searching for Lloyd the soul giving demon.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Apple Crisp::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Piled Higher and Deeper" from Lilkitsu
Review:
Things are just looking grimmer and grimmer for Mindy's future. And vampire Buffy, well, things are looking up, from a certain point of view... anyway, still enjoying the story. It does make one wonder, though, why didn't darkwing try to locate and close the new portal when negaduck showed his face again? No matter, the story's still going strong, and though it's a tad, wee bit dark (which I found a little surprising, but not disappointing), it's good! I look forward to more!
Review By [Lilkitsu] • Date [28 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Piled Higher and Deeper" from TwistedSlinky
Review:
Great chapter! Very exciting developments---and I just loved the way you handled dialogue for our favorite baddies, heehee. You should be so proud :)

Can't wait to see what happens! Glad we got to hear from Spike again, though that's mainly the fangirl in my talkin'. And Lloyd, nope, so didn't realize that was his name until your brought it up, hee.
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [28 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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