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Review of chapter "Welcome to the Family: Part 2" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I'm not a Batman fan...but I'm really enjoying this !
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Family: Part 2" from djhardim
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Looks good

Just a thought, what if Jessie was the grandson of Arn Munro and had inherited his powers?

http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Arnold_Munro_(New_Earth)
Comments from author:
I have a pretty intense plan for Jesse :3
Review By [djhardim] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Family: Part 2" from VillageOrchid
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This is okay to pretty good as a Bat-Family story, but I'm not seeing much of a reason for you to include Buffy-verse characters or their special knowledge, or personalities. Thus my interest is lowered.
Comments from author:
It's getting there. He's 12. For high school he's heading back to the hellmouth.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Family: Part 2" from Blackguard
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I am so loving this so far. Can't wait for more.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [20 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Family: Part 2" from CrystalBlaze
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Interesting take!

Nods to the movies, comics, and the animated shows, nice reference to Generations (an Elseworlds of World's Finest, I believe, as it showed the families of Superman and Batman as the decades passed), and engaging style all its own.
Comments from author:
I have the more precise timeline up on my profile.
It was really difficult to make and really hard to keep control of xD
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [9 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Family: Part 2" from VillageOrchid
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That's a lot of responsibility at such a young age, but the others who rained him obviously thought he deserved it.
Comments from author:
Well Dick in some canon's started as Robin pretty young :) I mean in the current DCaU Young Justice Dick is 13! And already on Young Justice! Which means he was Robin at LEAST a year, probably more!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Family: Part 1" from VillageOrchid
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I like that Xander, despite the training his undergoing, still knows he can be a kid and doesn't have to be the hero. No asking to go along with the others. The scene of three adult heroes heading out together from the Thanksgiving dinner table was a cool scenario.
Comments from author:
I thought it would put things into more perspective. Show that yes Xander will be ready when he's ready but no he's been raised well enough not to rush it.
Also Dick and Tim probably shared enough stories of where rushing in got them xD
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Obligatory Training Montage with Family Time" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Fun chapter and thanks for bringing in Xander's life such as it was.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Background information and the Prologue" from VillageOrchid
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Well, less Xandery since you have him starting out at age 11, but still interesting.
Does he have friends named Willow and Jesse in this universe?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Family: Part 2" from juniorsamples
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Hot damn! I thought this was one of those fics that had been abandoned. Glad to see you are still working on it. Thank you and ready for more.

Sam
Comments from author:
Yeah no I just got caught up in college sorry xD I've actually had 80% of this sitting on my comp finished for a year. But I kept "fixing" it. I edited it at least six times and this last time I just decided "screw it I'm posting it"
Review By [juniorsamples] • Date [7 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Family: Part 2" from RHatch
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Awesome update.... :D
Review By [RHatch] • Date [6 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Family: Part 1" from DarkFaerieYumi
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I like it! This is new and very cool!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [8 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Family: Part 1" from FrauleinWeisenheimer
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I love this!! Its so different that the usual batman crossovers, and I love that you are starting them young!! :D

Just one nitpick:" but a lot of kids in Gotham are /weary/ because my new family is well...rich."

The word you are looking for is wary. Weary means tired... I've seen this A LOT lately in fanfiction, and I hope to help stop the spread of this mistake.
Comments from author:
Well I'll be damned. I even had someone look it over for homonym mistakes like that. Thanks, I'll edit the chapter right quick! And I know I get SO pissed when people do that, but I much prefer people letting me know when I do it. However some people are very very snobby about that stuff, they get all pissy when you mention it even nicely.
Review By [FrauleinWeisenheimer] • Date [5 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Family: Part 1" from CrystalBlaze
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Firefly tech AND Venom? Too much, too fast.

Hell, the only reason Bane's made it as far as he has was that he worked himself up to handle it, and I'd imagine your timeline's Bane was much the same. Given the timeline itself, was he a 60's era nightmare for the Family? (I could easily see the 60's as being the Era of Banana Repulicans like the one that created Bane by [I believe] throwing a kid into a brutal prison for his father's rebellion..

I also see better copies or tributes coming along for Xander. The notion of a formidable Riddler legacy naming himself Enigma tickles, somehow..



After your reply, I felt I should add that twisted minds, meaning ours, simply think alike. This is a legacy tale, and villains can leave legacies as well. In fact, the very name I suggested is a case of a legacy, as it in itself is a clue to his opponents as to what they'll be facing.. at least, to anyone aware of Edward Nygma...
Comments from author:
Yeah the point of that combination was to show that while they constantly had an easy time with certain things, new stuff still often would take them by surprise.
And yes I was toying with a Riddle legacy myself. It's in my notes as a possible "behind the scenes" man.
And was I really that transparent hinting at future villain rip-offs? xD There is literally his first "arch-nemesis" planned for next chapter
Edit: After your edit I feel like I should look around for mind-readers. I mean seriously? xD
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [4 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Family: Part 1" from RHatch
Review:
great chapter..... :)
Review By [RHatch] • Date [4 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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