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Review of chapter "Scene IX" from Letomo
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Really sorry this doesn't continue - it's an interesting and fun read! Thanks for sharing what you did with us, the loyal readers!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scene IX" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Hmm interesting, explains about Kinsey, Willow would have been more careful with her request to the Gods. She should know how requests like this work, especially after the second one.

Other than the quibbles this is a great story, I hope you continue it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scene IX" from banner
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"Should I pull a Whedon and randomly kill someone you love? Or a Rowling and completely stunt Shelly's growth as a character? Or a Stargate and allow Kinsey to survive? Will Jean become this universe's Oracle?"

*hysterical giggles*

I think we really really NEED a cliche', here. Hmm. Maybe a Lost Tribe who are guarding a powerful artifact?
Review By [banner] • Date [26 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scene IX" from ambrosia
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You are so awesome words do not exist to describe your awesomeness, but if they did, it would be your picture next to the "awesome" entry in the dictionary. Excellent story!

Unfortunately, I'm kind of cr*p at plot, so probably won't be able to help there.
Review By [ambrosia] • Date [6 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scene III" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
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HA HA HA HA HA HA...

Harry laughed weakly. “Let’s try for five and see how that works. Any idea where we are, yet?”

“If this is anything like our world, I’d guess Africa. But I don’t see any swallows!”

“’s not coconut season yet.”


HA HA HA HA HA HA.....
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [22 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scene IX" from ora
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Nooooooo! I can't believe you pulled a batman.
Review By [ora] • Date [22 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scene IX" from Gideon
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OK, so now is time for Harry and Hermione to put their windarium leviosa practise to good use. How many simultaneous floatings can they do at once? (especially when one is a plane?) This would be a good time for the other Harry and Hermione and a whole bunch of Aurors to find them and be on hand to help float down the plane and anyone who has so recently been separated from it. I wonder if Zoe could control her body position and keep track of the falling plane well enough to Airsurf back on board. Altthough I don't know how that would actually help anyone...
Maybe the vain wizard host dude Godfrey or whatever could show up for a moment and help float some people to the ground.
I don't know where SG1 are by now but they seem to be somewhat behind the eightball. They may need some assistance to catch up. Maybe Thor (the alien one) can point Willow in the direction of doing something useful for a change!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [21 Dec 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scene VIII" from FariaLyton
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Just because he's off the plane, doesn't mean he'll be on the ground... :P
Review By [FariaLyton] • Date [17 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scene VIII" from CrystalBlaze
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Why do I get the feeling that Ptah is going to have Xander removed from the plane--and dropped from that height?

Willow Rosenberg, the only thing that boy needs saving from is YOU.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [17 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scene VIII" from banner
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... My brain is spinning around in circles.
This is fun!


[in US English, "Get him off" is slang for bringing someone (male) to orgasm. Could you use that little malapropism?]

And in a *proper* disaster movie, now would be a good time for the weather to change for the worse. A few lightning bolts would be entirely appropriate, don't you think?
Comments from author:
[...no. And now I have go to buy bleach.]
Review By [banner] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Act I" from Gideon
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Getting Xander off may make him happy - for a short time, until he realises everyone else is left behind :( Of course Willow also failed to specify what Ptah should get him off, or what he should be transferred "on" to. Off the plane? Off the planet? Off the grid? Off the merry go round we call Life? Let's hope not.
At least if Xander just gets pushed off the plane I can see Zoe jumping after him with a parachute, catching him in mid air, and them landing happily on a deserted Island where they can be Lost together for some considerable length of time.
Off planet would require the assistance of SG1 or Kevin Sorbo and Dawn depending on whether his travels are interplanetary or interdimensional.
Harry and Hermione haven't been heard from for a while - maybe they see the plane go down and come over to help?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scene VIII" from (Past Donor)mpop
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Off the plane...
Would that be off as in being thrown off, or off as in... well... any of the hundred different equally horrible suggestions floating around in my subconsciousness.

Willow really needs to start paying attention to Anya.
Review By [(Past Donor)mpop] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scene VIII" from Ghostrider
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First off..... Xander? Are you, per chance, Hannibal Smith's long lost son? Because even he wouldn't dream up a plan this terrible *shakes head in wonderment, abject fear, glee and disbelief*

If this doesn't cement the Xan-man's reputation as either a tactical genius/insane nutso fruitcake, I don't know what will. I do see, however, Jack O'Neill wanting to recruit him badly. He makes SG-1 look like Cub Scouts *VBEG*

As for Willow and Co. *shakes head in pity* As usual, she thinks because she has a high IQ, that she has wisdom. Nope, just wis-dumb. That is the ONE trait of her that always made me dislike her thoroughly. First, she gave Janus carte blanche, now she does the same to Ptah. Hasn't she learned anything from Anya about not wording your wish in the most complete manner? Better to have left well enough alone and wait with the other people who have loved ones on the plane then to go off no-cocked like she did here.

In any case, I love this story, it has the right amount of insanity and chaos. Fitting, since Xander is now an avatar for Janus.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [15 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scene VIII" from pazed
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O Willow willow Willow! knows the old forms but words her request in a way even I can spot the gaping chasm in! Ouchie
Review By [pazed] • Date [15 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scene VIII" from cmdruhura
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They really should have agreed on the exact wording of the request before they summoned him.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [15 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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