Review of chapter "Chapter One" from smolder
I have serious love for this story. The Lisbon / Jane interaction was so spot on it was wonderful, I especially loved how you described him: "It fit. That was the frightening part. Golden curls and smiles and a charming laugh... and buried under it all, rage. A burning, terrifying fury, that wanted to grab an innocent world by the throat and make it bleed."
Oooohhh. So good. *shivers*
And Van Pelt as a healer just seems so natural.
I always thought Lisbon understood Jane and his need to make Red John pay and that really shown in this fic. Thanks for writing it.
Review By [smolder
] • Date [8 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Please do I love it.
Review By [FireWolfe
] • Date [5 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Shieldage
Awesome. Great organization, glad they're all together.
Heh, nice use of the in-setting fanfic running rampant through Halloween World :D
Can Jane bend Godzilla's atomic fire? Heh, nah, probably not, at least without practice :)
Review By [Shieldage
] • Date [5 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]