Review of chapter "Giving Her Away" from Gideon
Nice touches on a life. A couple of unlikely pairings but you made them work pretty well in such a short space.
Review By [Gideon
] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Giving Her Away" from Taisy
Darn you, now there are so many things I just want to know: what made Millie decide to run to the muggle world, why didn't she tell Draco, what did she tell her daughter about the girl's father, is Pansy with Neville and if so how did that happen, what kind of hoopla did Banning and James cause when they got together, how do Harry and Draco handle their kids being together, and so on and so forth.
Thanks for the thought provoking read.
Comments from author:
*cough* Past, Present, Future Tense *cough*
Hopes that answers most of those questions. Because after I posted Banning, I remembered the *two* 1,000+ word starter pieces I had written for this series (and I started the whole Banning series back in '05).
Review By [Taisy
] • Date [8 Dec 10] • Not Rated