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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from FinalGuardian
Review:
Really, REALLY good sci-fi crossover. A little more than half-way through the writing really cleans up and I was hooked.
Comments from author:
Thank you FinalGuardian
Review By [FinalGuardian] • Date [22 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The dead planet - part 1" from FinalGuardian
Review:
I absolutely love this story, the ONLY complaint I have is that the wording is...awkward I guess, like the writer isn't used the English.
Comments from author:
Thank you FinalGuardian

You are right. I'm a native French speaker and only started to write fiction in English a little over three years ago.

So, while I have already progressed a lot since then, there is still room for improvement.

If you want to make yourself an opinion on the matter, "I Buffy, Adventuress" is my most recent fic.
Review By [FinalGuardian] • Date [21 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from deathgeonous
Review:
I love this fic. I seriously think that this fic is one of the most innovative and imaginative fics on this site. Even if it had way to much going on in it and I wished that you would focus a bit more on this or that, this was great. I am eagerly awaiting the sequel, or more like the sequels, to this fic, especially the Special Forces Sequel. I loved the idea of Ryoko Buffy. But I digress, this is/was a great and wonderful fic, so thank you ever so much for writing this and goodbye for now.
Comments from author:
Thank you for this review.

I think I finally got the right idea and have started to write something about the Special Forces.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [30 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from JakStrife
Review:
Hey, I'm wondering. Are you planning to write a sequel?
Comments from author:
Hello JakStrife and sorry for the delay in replying to this

The best answer I can give is probably but not for now.
Review By [JakStrife] • Date [17 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Chan
Review:
Now, this is an heck of an adventure gotten me curious as to what's happening next in this series.
Comments from author:
Thank you, Chan.

I have several ideas but nothing I can post at this point. I am also taken by other already posted stories and do not wish to start a new one at this point.
Review By [Chan] • Date [10 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from AlphaBeta
Review:
I guess something happen to prevent you from getting a chapter out. That's ok, RL can be a pain at times. Still hope to see that chapter soon!
Comments from author:
Hello AlphaBeta

Nothing dire, just my RPG club's annual convention that took more time than expected. It's here:

http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-28693-9/kedrann+Et+sidera+propagantur+ex+caldariam.htm
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [27 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Just wandering when the spin offs will start and update your other stories, like Et sidera propagantur ex caldariam. Hope it will be soon!
Comments from author:
Hell AlphaBeta

Barred incidents, I should have a chapter ready for Et sidera... this week-end.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [14 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Halloween Effect" from Mechconstrictor
Review:
I really want to like this story but I can't really get past the first chapter.There are too many shows that I have no knowledge about. If it was just one or two, I might be able to follow along but as it stands, I don't even know where to start.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review Mechconstrictor

The beginning of the Traveller Chronicles can get confusing. I wanted to write it in the way some anime or manga start, with a situation that only barely make sense but that you get to understand as the story progresses.

It was a partial success. I would advise to try to read the beginning without trying to analyze everything and let yourself sink in the story little by little.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [3 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from FinitePossibilities
Review:
Now I want to see how the Asgard react when they find out about the Muvians via the Cimmeria device. I mean as far as the Asgard know, the Furlings have popped up out of nowhere, some jackass has been fiddling with the Hammer's software, (who has either one hell of a god complex or more terrifyingly has the chops to back up their claims to divinity) and the Tau'ri have apparently gone psycho. On the other hand once they actually meet each other its going to be one hell of a shock for both sides. After all the Muvians pretty much kick the Asgard's ass across the board in what they can do with the rather obvious exception of FTL and point to point teleportation capabilities and maybe power generation depending on what the exact yield is on a Neutrino Ion Generator. However they'll scare the crap out of the Muvians because they did the whole Singularity thing the Muvians are doing now, on a far smaller scale no less, and show EXACTLY what happens if you screw it up. The war on the Replicators just sped up the process. Plus they bring with them the info that they're probably the next in the buffet line, if only because Goa'uld tech just plain sucks next to Asgard and Mu tech. Then again I'd love to see what happens when the Replicators try to hack a freaking tree.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review FinitePossibilities

Does Joyce have a goddess complex? Given that she is 'the local Washu', she has some things to back up a claim at divinity, being an avatar of a Chousin. The fact she is either completely bonkers or so above human way of thinking it makes the same impression is another matter.

The encounter with the Asgard will certainly see sparks fly. I have some ideas on how to handle it, but not enough to make a story out of it for the moment. The thing is that the Muvians, thanks to Appleseed and Zentraedi bioroid technology, have what can save the Asgard.

Regarding the Replicators, there is another matter to consider. The Muvians are the first civilization they will encounter that has sentient AIs. Those may come up with wholly new solutions, maybe ones that do not consider annihilation as the only possible end of Replicator menace.
Review By [FinitePossibilities] • Date [20 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from branz
Review:
i was wondering if you could do a similar story using gundam, Eve Online, Supreme commander
and maybe an AU harry potter for the magic side of things
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review branz

To answer your question, I won't. I have two reasons for this.

The first one is that I don't know enough about the series you mention, Harry Potter excepted.

The second is that Harry Potter is (in my opinion) a difficult series to introduce in scientifically-oriented fics. This is entirely debatable I agree, but it is why I renounced to use Harry Potter in any crossover (and discontinued the one I had).
Review By [branz] • Date [30 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from deathgeonous
Review:
Ah, I decided to reread this fic again, and then I noticed something. You finished this fic and I never read the last chapter. Um..., opps? Anyways, I totally support your ending this part of the fic here, because, as great as this fic is... it's allover the place with the plot. I mean, sure it's great and it all made sense, but you had way too much going on, and I sincerely hope that for the first focused sequel, you center in on the special forces group, as I loved the idea of Buffy as Ryoko. Oh, and I STILL wanta know where you were going with that escaped Old One. That small scene just left me wanting more. Well, thanks for writing this, and goodbye for now.
Comments from author:
Thank you deathgeonous,

While I have some ideas for stories in the TC universe, I have nothing solid enough at this point.

The Special Forces is definitely one of the focuses I intend to use, but the 'overpower' factor makes it difficult.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [30 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Berserkerzeroone
Review:
I loved this story and hope that you continue with it.

Hopefully you'll show the fallout of the earlier limited disclosure and the release of certain Muvian technologies and tracking down the Trust.

The fact that Sam is to be a dragon and Jolinar's mother is another twist I wasn't expecting and yet am enjoying the journey of and can't wait for more.

*When life leads you to the other side of the galaxy, hopefully you're given a working interstellar vessel that is easy to understand or the manual is at least in your language.*
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review Berserkerzeroone

Due to the reasons I explained in the epilogue, I will rather do sequels that are more centered on a part of the TC world
Review By [Berserkerzeroone] • Date [24 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from branz
Review:
Masterfully done, well woven to maximum effect,
the only thing i don't like is a distinct lack of Mobile Suits, but that's a personal taste
(Macross Transforming ships just rub me wrong, fighters that transform
are fine, but I consider there to be a size limit to such things).

But otherwise a wonderful story, doesn't get bogged down in Mary Sue or overkill.
nor get too complicated or goes on and on. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you branz,

I can understand your point of view regarding the transforming ships. My own point of view about those are that they are fine in space but dependent on anti-gravity when on a planet so that they do not collapse under their own weight (like the Behemoth could not stand without an active Lambda Driver in Full Metal Panic)
Review By [branz] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story, sad to see it end but I understand why this story ended.

Thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks tchizek
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Genuka
Review:
Awe inspiring story. You had to juggle so much and integrate so many universes and backgrounds with very little tweaking. *bows in respect to master story teller*
I look forward to anything else in this series that you write.
Comments from author:
Thanks Genuka
Review By [Genuka] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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