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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from BritneyandJacob
Review:
Excellent chapters 1-6. I love them. Please do continue this story. I look forward to a update soon.
Review By [BritneyandJacob] • Date [23 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from LalaithQuetzalli
Review:
Now this is some fic.
I find it interesting. It was great, the way Dawn stood up to Edward, certainly something he isn't likely to forget anytime soon. Wonder how she'll handle the revelations now. Faith probably ought to be involved.
I'm curious if a Slayer has the strength to actually fight this kind of vampires, or only the demonic ones. Also, will Dawn be able to do anything, maybe some magic, something related to her being the Key, or a bit of both?
Oh, and something I've been wondering since the second chapter or so...will the girls turn out to be imprints (either or both) for some of the werewolves? I mean, there's Seth and Embry stilll...and the younger ones...though those would probably be a bit too young for them...
Wonder how Buffy will react when she realizes Dawn has ended up in the middle of another supernatural mess! jejeje And now that I actually think about it, she seems to be just like Bella in that respect, atracting supernatural beings anywhere she goes...
In any case, I really hope you'll update soon. I wanna read more of this!
Review By [LalaithQuetzalli] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Silver
Review:
I love the story! I am very intersted in seeing the confrontation of Faith & Dawn vs weres vs sparkly vamps. Great characterization of Faith & Dawn. Dawn vs Edward could be dangerous. and what did the pyschic vamp see anyway? I alos like Faith's frustration at not being able to slay anything. Do slayer powers actually affect the cullens? Anyway, I could not give this a 10 since it hasn't been update for so long. Please keep up the good work and update soonest!
Review By [Silver] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Past Donor)GACTsevil
Review:
Oh, Edward that was not what you should be dating to the slayer's sis.
Review By [(Past Donor)GACTsevil] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from EasterCat
Review:
This is one of the few twilight stories that I've read, Meyer's version included, that doesn't make me hork.
I look forward to reading more.
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from KatieKat
Review:
great story can't wait to read more
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
Review By [KatieKat] • Date [27 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Rissah
Review:
It's a little slow but I like Faith and Dawn so I'm going to stick with it. I also find it really strange that Dawn wouldn't figure out something demony was off with Edward right away. The Dawn/Jake relationship also seems over done so I'm looking forward to a new twist. Keep working at it!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like the girls and yeah, it's a bit slow at the minute because it's all just setting the scene but I promise things will pick up once the secret's out!
Review By [Rissah] • Date [25 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Aryll
Review:
I forgot the shifting makes the werewolves look closer to twenty-five, so Faith would think they're closer to her age. I always feel kind of bad for Slayers being crossed into the Twilight universe, cause they're pretty much outmatched by every supernatural in it. That's gotta be an ego killer.

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks I'm glad you're enjoying it and I agree but it's so much fun writing Faith as the little fish in a big pond as opposed to her usual super-powered self!
Review By [Aryll] • Date [24 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from NutsContract
Review:
:/ Aw, you kinda skipped over the Cullen and Dawn confrontation I was expecting. And Faith thinks that the La Push tribe is to blame for all the killings? Well... that's interesting. I know I shouldn't be asking this question but I have to know... is someone going to imprint on Faith or Dawn? Because with Twilight stories it seems inevitable. Or are there any pairings (besides the obvious) at all? Well, I look forward to your update! Keep on trucking! :)
Comments from author:
Don't worry it's coming! I'm just slowly building up to it is all...
I'm sorry I can't reveal any future pairings, it would spoil the moment when it comes to it! But I will tell you both Faith and Dawn bag themselves some man-candy... any ideas who gets who??? I'm mean I know :P
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [24 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from aveave
Review:
Great story. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you're liking it. I'm working on a new chapter as we speak :)
Review By [aveave] • Date [23 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from NutsContract
Review:
I wonder if Edward can read Dawn's mind? Is that why he is so weirded-out around her? I'm loving this story. Please update soon!!
Comments from author:
Haha all will be revealed in good time I promise and I'm really glad you're liking it :)
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Clandestine
Review:
This is a very awesome start of a story. I can't wait to read what you write next!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying it
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [28 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Aryll
Review:
I really liked Dawn's impression of Bella when she first meets her, but it seems her observation falls flat on the supernatural dismissal. She's sure in for a surprise! And the bit at the end with Faith was sweet :)
Comments from author:
Thank you I'm glad you liked it and yeah I'm really looking forward to writing Dawn's reaction when she finds out about Bella's supernatural secrets :)
Review By [Aryll] • Date [27 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Aryll
Review:
I'm not the biggest twilight fan, but every once in a while a fic will suck me back in and I think this just may be such a fic :) You write Dawn and Faith very well, looking forward to seeing what 'big plans' you have!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for the lovely review. I think Dawn and Faith have a brilliant partnership and they're so easy to write which makes my job easier
Review By [Aryll] • Date [17 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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