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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AwesomeGeek
Review:
Amazing! Having Dawn say they weren't going to look for Buffy was a genius idea! The scoobs had a lot to answer for when they kicked Buffy out of her own house.
Great chapter Jez, now go post more. LOL!
Review By [AwesomeGeek] • Date [6 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)softly
Review:
buffy's disinformation and work at disappearance was smart, but I like that dawn was mature enough to take put her foot down and really insist that they leave her alone.
Review By [(Current Donor)softly] • Date [18 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
very well done. thank you. glad you use dawn to see what buffy's friends could not.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [17 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Wonderfully written series! Can't wait for the next installment.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bunney
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wow wow wow....awesome dawn clip :)
Review By [Bunney] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sylven
Review:
It is a testament to my faith in you as an author that I was willing to read a story centred around Dawn.

She could conceivably be one of the characters that I detest the most in the BtVS series and you've made her tolerable. You've written her very well. There is character growth, introspection, and happily enough, no noticeable whining which is something that most authors fall back into when they're writing her (an unfortunate side effect of the character being dreadful - yes, my Dawn issues may have come out).

In any case, I feel as if my faith has been rewarded because I would have been poorer if I hadn't read this section of "Above and Below." It has moved the story along and helped deal with some of the issues that inevitably would have come up. It may have even opened the door to "scooby" interaction in the future in a way that is realistic (insofar as not having ignored the pink elephant in the room of their treatment of her).

Thank you very much for your stories, I'm looking forward to seeing more of them!

C.C.
Review By [Sylven] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kerrykhat
Review:
I loved this look into Dawn's reaction to Buffy's disappearance, and how it had her come to terms with her actions and the consequences thereof. Amazing, as usual, Jez, and I can't wait for the next installment!
Review By [kerrykhat] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Iceflame
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Not sure if Willow or Xander will want to take that as an answer, but Dawn it seems finally understands the full ramifications to their actions. I even think Xander and Willow will, eventually. But it'll be a hard painful road to understanding, some things you just can't take back; especially if you never TRY.
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [13 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Good for you Dawn. It is about time that someone in the gang respected Buffy's decisions. After all they won't be hard to find, so Buffy can always come back - when she is ready.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [13 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cainan
Review:
I like your portrayal of Dawn
and the repetition works
Review By [Cainan] • Date [13 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Thank goodness Dawn was grown up enough to realize that going after Buffy would only make things worse. Wonder if the others will listen to her though.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [13 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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