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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from JeanClaudeslover
Review:
This is interesting.

Congrats on graduating from college it's very exuberating feeling. I walked in my college graduation last Saturday. I wish you all the luck in the world.
Comments from author:
Thanks, it was a tough couple of years, but we've made it huh? Wish you the best as well.
Review By [JeanClaudeslover] • Date [11 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from mscecilyunderwood
Review:
Thanks for sharing your creativity with us. Although im definitely thirsting for more of this story. Congratulations on your graduation! Hoe to read more from you
Comments from author:
The real thanks should go to all of you, the readers. So again, thank you for taking the time to give my story a chance and to additional thanks for leaving a comment.
Review By [mscecilyunderwood] • Date [9 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from bradsan
Review:
Oh you described exactly the difference between Buffy vampires and the vampires in the Anita Blake version. Buffy's vampires are soulless corpse all the time and the demon inside keeps the body together(I always thought). In the Blake version they are soulful body's, they are not possessed by a demon and they have a blood-circulation if they are awake. How that's possible I never understand because their heart isn't beating but blood circulation means alive.

like I said you told the difference when Buffy killed a vampire and saw the body didn't turned into dust but leaving a body.

Can't wait for the longer chapters.
Comments from author:
I'm sorry to disappoint, but because it's a drabble-fic, the chapters will be shorter. To compensate, there will be obviously more of them. Cheers! Have a warm Holiday!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [22 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from mariegilbert
Review:
I'm intrigued so far, it'll be interesting to see where this goes.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

-Jay
Review By [mariegilbert] • Date [26 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from pezz
Review:
Interesting start. Can't wait to find out who the players in this fic are. More please?
Comments from author:
This will probably be updated sometime next week, focusing at the moment on the Naruto/Buffy story.

EDIT: Focusing on BtVS/Naruto fic, but will eventually get back to this.

-Jay
Review By [pezz] • Date [21 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from deathgeonous
Review:
Again, this is interesting. Thanks for writing this, although can you make the chapters a but longer? Bye for now.
Comments from author:
Will be expanded, yes.

-Jay
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [20 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from CuzItsGotToBeBlood
Review:
hmmm, I wonder who she killed.......
Thanks for updating :) Very nice if a little short.
Comments from author:
I wonder that as well. Probably an unimportant individual that needed a good spanking.

-Jay
Review By [CuzItsGotToBeBlood] • Date [19 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Gideon
Review:
"Huh. Dead body. A girl doesn't see that every day." Lol. I would have thought that would be something that Buffy did see every day :) A vampire that doesn't dust though, that would be unusual.
Comments from author:
That's what I'm referring to - a body belonging to a vampire. Usual methods of slayage calls for a stake or a beheading.

Regardless, I attempted another line.

-Jay
Review By [Gideon] • Date [19 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from evilredknight
Review:
Your going to have REAL chapters in the story right?
This vague half informed kind of writing does not agree with me. (Gives me gas)
Comments from author:
I'm sorry that it doesn't agree with you.

As Buffy becomes more Lucid, chapters should be more coherent. My style of writing follows the mood and temperance of the characters. If my story came off as vague, perhaps I did my job as a writer - I conveyed Buffy's confusion.

Please do not take this as an attack for your review - it was most helpful. It gave me insight to what others think and how I should improve.

Thank you.

-Jay
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [19 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
WOW! I want more!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the praise.

-Jay
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [19 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Nightscream
Review:
how is this an Anita Blake Crossover?


***Edit****
ooOohhhh ok, I thought it said it was completed... sorry.
Comments from author:
It's just a prologue, a set up for the rest of the piece to come.

EDIT: It's a reasonable mistake, don't worry too much about it.

-Jay
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [18 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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