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Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Aista
Review:
A Naruto/BtVS crossover? I thought hmmm yeah this will be a laugh, no way can it work. Well I'm shocked and terribly jealous because you're definitely rocking this fandom (small that it is). Your writing is well done, the plot so far is engaging and the characterisation is superb. I like like like Super!Buffy, there's a bone sharp edge of ruthlessness to her that I adore. I'd like to say more but I'd rather save it for further chapters.
Review By [Aista] • Date [22 Sep 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from kelvin
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Review By [kelvin] • Date [10 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from randyzoopurple
Review:
loved it so much
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from randyzoopurple
Review:
update it please great story
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [2 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from randyzoopurple
Review:
love this story really so good
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [18 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from borgrabbit
Review:
Haiku fugue:

Storm on horizon
Mouse fingers stooping eagle
Good day not to die
>^_^<

This is one of my older ones that I thought had the potential to be appropriate.

Great chapter, though I had to reread the entire story to refresh my memory. Here's hoping that your Muse begins to grin widely upon you and your's.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the Haiku, much appreciated. I'm currently focusing on the Hikaru no Go fandom at FF.net, but I'll eventually turn my attention back.
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from (Current Donor)softly
Review:
I'm really glad you updated! It took me a little while to review because I reread the entire story but I've enjoyed it just as much in its entirety all over again and although I've found a couple of parts a bit confusing I think it's the sort of that will sort itself out as more of the story comes out.
Comments from author:
If you could please elaborate on what parts you found confusing, I can always go back and reread it as well. More often than not, it's meant to be vague and lead readers to think, but I have been inconsistent before in my writing, so it doesn't hurt to ask. Happy Holidays.
Review By [(Current Donor)softly] • Date [22 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from seawurm
Review:
Great to read your work again, you have been missed.

Good job!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind words.
Review By [seawurm] • Date [21 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Valkyrie
Review:
Buffy/HP stories are a dime a dozen and usually not particularly original. Naruto crossovers, well-done Naruto crossovers, however, are quite rare. My vote's for this more than that.
Comments from author:
If anything, the new crossovers will be a drabble-fic, so they SHOULDN'T take much time, but I'll keep that in mind. Have a happy Holiday!
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [20 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from (Current Donor)softly
Review:
Umm I am super enjoying this so far! I know superBuffyness is a little cliche or whatever but I feel like you've definitely written it well and I really like that you've given the role of medic and caregiver within the town and a balance of her own issues so far. It's not like she's come in guns drawn to save them all and everyone lives perfectly ever after, you know? I like that she's bitter and a bit selfish, wanting Naruto to realise what a burden/responsibility he is to her, even though he's just a child.

Also I'm interested to see how this is going to progress and how you might bring other characters into this because there are so many good ones laying about! I hope you update again soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you for your generous review, it definitely made my day. In regards to integrating other characters into the fray, there's always a possibility. Death is but the next great adventure, no?

-J
Review By [(Current Donor)softly] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Gideon
Review:
Good to see you back again.
Comments from author:
Thank you.

-J
Review By [Gideon] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Cristina
Review:
This Root boy that is reporting...is he Sai?

thanks for an update, it made my day.
Comments from author:
Thanks for taking the time to read; very good attention to detail by the way.

-J
Review By [Cristina] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from justapiranha
Review:
yeah an update! I thought this was an orphened fic. Nice to see that you still have plans for it.
Comments from author:
Indeed, thank you for continuing to read.

-J
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from stahchild
Review:
I'm so glad that you've come back to this story. I follow you both on here and via ff.net :) I think I may have already said it before - but it does bare repeating. This is one of the better Buffy/Naruto crossovers, in fact, this one of the few non-slash Buffy centric Naruto crossovers around.

So yes, you updating? Its a great thing!

Thank you for doing so.
Comments from author:
Getting my final credits for the Chemistry portion of my Major has not been easy these past few months and it's definitely had an impact on my writing, but hearing such praise has definitely cheered me up some, thank you.

-J
Review By [stahchild] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from (Current Donor)Blackswordzero
Review:
Good chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you.

-J
Review By [(Current Donor)Blackswordzero] • Date [18 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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