I'm really glad you updated! It took me a little while to review because I reread the entire story but I've enjoyed it just as much in its entirety all over again and although I've found a couple of parts a bit confusing I think it's the sort of that will sort itself out as more of the story comes out.
Comments from author:
If you could please elaborate on what parts you found confusing, I can always go back and reread it as well. More often than not, it's meant to be vague and lead readers to think, but I have been inconsistent before in my writing, so it doesn't hurt to ask. Happy Holidays.
Buffy/HP stories are a dime a dozen and usually not particularly original. Naruto crossovers, well-done Naruto crossovers, however, are quite rare. My vote's for this more than that.
Comments from author:
If anything, the new crossovers will be a drabble-fic, so they SHOULDN'T take much time, but I'll keep that in mind. Have a happy Holiday!
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [20 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Umm I am super enjoying this so far! I know superBuffyness is a little cliche or whatever but I feel like you've definitely written it well and I really like that you've given the role of medic and caregiver within the town and a balance of her own issues so far. It's not like she's come in guns drawn to save them all and everyone lives perfectly ever after, you know? I like that she's bitter and a bit selfish, wanting Naruto to realise what a burden/responsibility he is to her, even though he's just a child.
Also I'm interested to see how this is going to progress and how you might bring other characters into this because there are so many good ones laying about! I hope you update again soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you for your generous review, it definitely made my day. In regards to integrating other characters into the fray, there's always a possibility. Death is but the next great adventure, no?
I'm so glad that you've come back to this story. I follow you both on here and via ff.net :) I think I may have already said it before - but it does bare repeating. This is one of the better Buffy/Naruto crossovers, in fact, this one of the few non-slash Buffy centric Naruto crossovers around.
So yes, you updating? Its a great thing!
Thank you for doing so.
Comments from author:
Getting my final credits for the Chemistry portion of my Major has not been easy these past few months and it's definitely had an impact on my writing, but hearing such praise has definitely cheered me up some, thank you.
-J
Review By [stahchild] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]