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Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Dragonelf
Review:
You did a good job with this story. :D

::Starts reading the sequel::

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Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Interesting at the end, with the mention of Zeus's two daughters! Does what Faith mentioned mean that their spirits (?) are present in her and Kailey? My inquiring mind would like to know!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [23 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Thedruid
Review:
nice that's all I gotta say
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
The spiritual side is promising, but you seem to have powered the heroes excessively.

Good opponent.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear that you've liked it. And no, I don't think that they were excessively powered, at least not to me.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from serenityselena
Review:
an intriguing story ^_^
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad that you've liked it!
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [13 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from jormunguard
Review:
Good story so far. Interested in seeing how you explain Faith being a giantess in the spirit world. Excelent read so far tho.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm happy to see that you're liking my story. And as for the spirit world...we'll return to it later.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [25 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
it is christmas eve. that was a terrible place to stop. thank you for the very good (but short) read. more please.
Comments from author:
Okay, I'll update. Thanks for the review. Glad that you like the story.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [24 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from hysteriumredux
Review:
First time I've seen a reference to a "vishap" outside of academia.
Comments from author:
And that's a good thing, right?
Review By [hysteriumredux] • Date [24 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from JoeB
Review:
I guess I got a little esoteric with my last review.

If you have never seen Kolchak: the Night Stalker it's well worth the time and effort to look up.

Your story pacing reminds me a lot of one of his episodes, hence my comment.
Comments from author:
Well, that's okay. I didn't have a chance to see Kolchak, but maybe I'll be able to see it in the future. Thanks for the reviews!
Review By [JoeB] • Date [21 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from spk
Review:
Very intriguing start. Can't wait to read more. :)
Comments from author:
Glad to hear this. More excitement is yet to come!
Review By [spk] • Date [21 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from JoeB
Review:
You need to add a reproter in a bad suit and a straw hat sticking his nose in the police business.

Nicely done, still enjoying this.
Comments from author:
Well, I'm not really good writing reporters, so I think I will have to do without one - for now. Thanks for the review.
Review By [JoeB] • Date [20 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
The plot thickens...

Great story so far. I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm doing my best. The next chapter is coming soon. Hopefully, you'll like it.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [20 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from JoeB
Review:
You have me wondering what kind of dinosaur the primal spirit is manifesting as. It doesn't seem to be one of the big ones, though it's defiantly a carnivore.

Glad you are updating often, I can't wait to read what comes next.
Comments from author:
Oh, it's not a dinosaur, it's something different, though still prehistoric. And yes, it is definetly a carnivore as well. The next chapter will start to hint at what it is, and thanks for your review, BTW.
Review By [JoeB] • Date [19 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Greywizard
Review:
Sid being excited about something he discovered in the course of the autopsy is usually not a good sign for whichever case the team is working on. ;-)
Comments from author:
That's correct - things are about to get worse.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [19 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from PATM
Review:
Pretty good, it looks like a motive for the attacks is coming. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and yeah, I'll be coming to the motive eventually. Thanks for the review.
Review By [PATM] • Date [19 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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