Review of chapter "The Response (The Invitation Part 2)" from AonGealach
Review:
That's really cute! I hope you post more in this series soon>
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [8 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Response (The Invitation Part 2)" from Doodle
Review:
Excellent chapter. 1,000/10
Review By [Doodle] • Date [7 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Response (The Invitation Part 2)" from Senko
Review:
Just took a look but its not really my thing. However a minor point I noticed is you said Rory's last name was pond, mentioned the Pandorica and that he was looking for his wife. I'm fairly sure though they don't marry with him taking Amy's last name until after the pandorica was destroyed. It was the something blue at their wedding that let Amy remember and pull the doctor back after he closed the cracks of time.
Comments from author:
yes but Roman Rory introduced himself as Roronicus Pondicus.