I am eagerly awaiting the next story in this sequence. Another one I have managed to read more than 3 times so far. Not deep, or emotional, but a really fun series. Please, keep going!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [17 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Squee!!!!! Bumblebee made an appearance as did Mitchell!
Ya made mah day, ya did! Now Xander has driven two, [i]TWO[/i] Sentient cars and Mitchell from SG1 has shown up, WOW! Ya really know how ta twist and turn the storyline ya have, I mean I laughed when I read the part about the 1976 Yellow beat-up Camaro with twin black racing stripes and that Xander managed to knock down the price from $5000 to $4000, and then I was just waiting for the radio to do something weird like Bumblebee did, or even have him stand up and act cute like he is.
I hope to read more of ya story soon, ya got meh hooked for more!
Please, Please, Please on bended knees update soon.
Review By [CaptainCaliene] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from summerdancer
Review:
nice! Did not expect it. So.... more, please!
Review By [summerdancer] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Me, mostly because the Terminator would have been far too obvious and while your stuff isn't exactly deep, even you're not as bad as to dangle something out there teasingly and then deliver exactly what people expect. If it had been the Terminator, you just would have stated as a fact that she was appearing.
Review By [JoeHundredaire] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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