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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
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A good insight into Buffy's train of thought at the time she ran away to LA and the fact than even when she wants to run away she can't help getting involved.
I saw a couple of missing letters or words in strange places, you may want to read through again before posting next time. The last paragraph is especially bad. eg "n the mood to going around and fight it out" here "going around and " is redundant and can be left out.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [26 Dec 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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