This story rules already. I think it could have been done without the crossover with Harry Potter at all, but I'm assuming you have something lined up for down the road that necessitated it. Anyway, I like the whole alternate events thing you have going on, and I'd like to hear more about how that went. Thanks for the great read.
Comments from author:
Thanks=) It's a beginning of series ("Under the sun"). I'd love to try and write it as a single story, but then I'm going to abandon it right after chapter 7, which is no fun. So, series of one-offs. Alterations will be explained in further stories, mainly as flashbacks. Anyway, thank you for reviewing. Thou I'd appreciate technical criticism.
Okay confused is Harry a Au or what, and if he is Au how did he become ascended. I like the start but you are left questioning things. Okay maybe thats what you wanted, but then again with the small back story it still leaves you questioning about Buffy. Willow and Faith.
An interesting idea, though obviously not sure where you're going with it. My hope is not for powered-up Xander but "being the one who sees" with cue cards (Harry) allowing him to throw a few wrenches or spanners in the works. Small changes rippling far.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Dec 10] • Not Rated
