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Review of chapter "Informing Grandad" from trecebo
Velly interlesting. A unique take on the whole Xander/new dad kinda thing. I hope you have more for me to read.
Comments from author:
It will eventually have more- as the muse bites.
Review By [trecebo] • Date [31 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Informing Grandad" from Jaylynn
I wasn't sure about the first chapter but second chapter makes me want to know more. I especially want to see Jack meeting the scoobies, most importantly faith. XD
Comments from author:
It's going to be a run of as the muse bites but I really can't wait for that meeting either.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [31 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Informing Grandad" from VillageOrchid
Huh. (to quote Oz). Kinda cool. Thanks for continuing.

EDIT: Don't fret. Okay, constructively - it was a little rushed in regards to what's been going on between the chapters, background information, and the conversation itself. In terms of the story problem solving - very interesting. It is kind of "earth-shattering" for Giles to find out some of his notions about himself are even more different than he dreamed. However, considering all of the evil and earth shattering PTSD inducing stuff that he's been though over recent time, the reaction and conversation were plausible. In short it would have been better if you had drawn it out over a longer period of time/more instances of conversation and visiting, but what you had worked. (and that's why "silent bob" is usually silent.)
Comments from author:
good huh? Mad huh? Unexpected huh?

Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kizunakat
More please???? I'm begging you. This is to good to stop here. Kizuna
Comments from author:
I'll consider it. Ideas of how Children of Earth could have gone with Xander as Jacks adopted grandson come visiting and a Willow on call have me considering writing it out.
Review By [kizunakat] • Date [27 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Needs a little more expansion, but interesting. We need to recall that Giles is matralinially descended from Watchers not through his father, Giles or no.
Comments from author:
I didn't actually know that *smirks* I have plans for a part two now explaining that XD
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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