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Review of chapter "The Real Chapter 2" from BuffyFOREVER
Review:
I love this story. Please update.
Review By [BuffyFOREVER] • Date [6 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DragonBard
Review:
Sorry, while it's interesting, it's a bit out of left field.

No mention to Dawn that she's meeting their grandfather, nothing explaining why Buffy and Dawn never mentioned knowing magic (or at least knowing 'of' magic) before.

These are things that should have been addressed.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [7 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Real Chapter 2" from JessieMidnight
Review:
I love this story. Please continue it. Very well written. I also like the bit about the divination Prof fooling everyone. Personally if I was a seer. I wouldn't want people to take me very seriously. But I be annoying instead ! I don't think she over is qualified. I think Buffy in series was very smart and playing dumb was easy for her. It let her opponents under estimate her. Also it helped that she probably hid her smarts before she was the slayer. Because she wanted to be popular and the popular kids are smart...or at least don't appear to be. There is also the point that. While she groans about reading books. She dose know her stuff. Also when she started out she was a teenager. Most teenagers complain about something. Her grades weren't always good. But she managed to pull off a really high score for her SATs.

Sorry about the rant. I really do love this story. Please continue it.
Review By [JessieMidnight] • Date [11 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Real Chapter 2" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome story so far, I loved it. I can't wait to read more.

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Real Chapter 2" from Scathach
Review:
I really liked this! Do you plan on continuing it?
Comments from author:
I do plan on continuing this story. I haven't had much of a chance to write up something new for a bit as my mind was invaded my other story ideas, but now that those are out the way I can concentrate on this and my other stories like Lady Firebird. It may take a while though as real life things have to take priority over this I'm afraid.
Review By [Scathach] • Date [12 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Real Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
haha love it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [22 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Real Chapter 2" from sjyu
Review:
I'm enjoying reading this story. I like a powerful Buffy.
Review By [sjyu] • Date [16 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Real Chapter 2" from Davee
Review:
"Someone mentioned how they think that I made Buffy to powerful and to unlike herself compared to the Series version, and some other differences. For those interested I have explained away some of them . . . "

Ignore them. If they don't like it., they can write their own. I On the other hand, absolutely love what's happening so far. Hope to read more soon.
Review By [Davee] • Date [12 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Real Chapter 2" from ChaosLady
Review:
Wonderful! I didn't know Snape could blush!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [9 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Real Chapter 2" from Rich
Review:
Pretty good so far. I'm hoping you'll eventually provide the backstory which connects Buffy-the-super-witch to Buffy the Vampire Slayer; you'll probably have to add a few years to her apparent age, but it might still be doable.

Whether you intended to or not, you've pointed out a flaw in the logic of the original story - the fact that Umbridge's activities really couldn't have been kept secret in a place where the portraits can observe and report everything that goes on, in any room that has a portrait. In fact, a lot of the Golden Trio's "secret" activities (like sneaking out at all hours or "borrowing" potion ingredients) should have been impossible.
Review By [Rich] • Date [7 Jan 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Real Chapter 2" from Eureka
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Don't care what others say! I LIKE THIS STORY!!
Please do not change this story just cause some are being igits. I at least can see how Buff would have gotten some of that from her work. I mean, not the flying mind you cause I don't remember anything like that, but otherwise yeah! Dueling..What she did every night, was part of it.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [6 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Real Chapter 2" from Martin
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It just seems too far AU. Yes a person named Buffy could have done and been taught all those things, but not the Buffy in the series Buffy the Vampire Slayer. It's like you put someone that looked and was named Buffy, but not any Buffy that we would know. So why even call her Buffy, just have her as an OC Mary Sue.
Review By [Martin] • Date [6 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Real Chapter 2" from LNR
Review:
I don't care. I just REALLY like this story.

More Please...


SOON!!
Review By [LNR] • Date [6 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude 1" from kissdoogie
Review:
This is such a great story so far!! I really hope you continue it farther.
Review By [kissdoogie] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude 1" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
so cool! Glad you updated:D
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [4 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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