can't wait for an update. I hope you'll do it soon. When I read the first chapter. I thought don't forget tracking this one but in the end with DAD You made me so curious that I won't forget to push tracking. Summers and Summers this gone be so much fun."LOL"
Oh buffy being Immortal could be a price if she could take the one she loves with her to other demensions when she is done in this one. If the PTB agree with that ofcourse, but they will owe her so it couldn't be hard to confince them.
Maybe she could make her own immortal team that could tag along with her. Ofcouse when they go evil they'll become mortal again. But this one is just a dream to good to come true or something for another story one champion each from another demension.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
I really liked these there chapters. Poor Buffy with all theses girls abort I guess sher really would feel useless just about. So now she's immortal and with the X Men but she doesn't know that they are mutants. I really hope that there will be more chapters soon you left it hanging there. Please write somemore I wanna now how her meeting with Charles Xavier goes.
Comments from author:
Don't worry, I'm working on writing more. I left myself stuck in a bit of an odd place where I left off while writing next chapter and am deciding where to go from there. But I haven't abandoned this story and I don't plan to. :) Thank you so much for your review!
Review By [ROGMethos] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
sooooooooooo excited you updated!!! really great chappie, well written and in character for buffy and the x-men too. i am dying to see what happens when they get to the mansion and logan and buffy meet. PLEASE write more soon or else i fear i shall suffer withdrawl! ;-)
Review By [GypsyWitch] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm so excited!! I was waiting for this story to update. I've been tracking it for awhile.
I didn't notice any mistakes, LOL, but that may have been because I was so caught up in reading that I wasn't paying attention to much of anything! :-)
Excellent story so far. I really hope you continue!
Review By [soulNchantress] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Not Rated
I know I got a giggle out of the 'Dad' part. Somehow, I don't think Buffy thinks as funny, though.
Comments from author:
I thought it would be a funny contact name because of the way he called her 'kid' a lot. Glad someone got a chuckle from it! Thank you so much for reviewing!!
I like a lot about this, but there are a few plot issues that tend to jar or just seem OOC. Most of them deal with you getting Buffy to the Marvelverse.
You had Buffy far too compliant when she was told that she'd never make it to Heaven. Any Buffy from any season would have gone off on Whistler for permanently separating her from her loved ones, especially her mom.
Buffy would/should have taken the time to contact Dawn, at the least, and likely Willow, Xander, and Giles, should they still be alive in your Buffyverse.
When you give her the cell phone, it's pretty obvious that you're setting her up to be separated from the Powers, as it would be easier to give her a ritual, rather than a very breakable object.
However, once you get her to the Marvelverse, she reacts perfectly in character, as do the X-Men, and the pacing is well done, indeed. I look forward to what comes next.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the thoughtful review. It may seem OOC, but the main reason I did it that way was to not drag it out too long. I thought about her contacting Dawn, but with the way I wanted the situation set up, it was impossible. Also, by contacting Dawn, the point of her being completely alone would have been a bit weaker. There's a small bit about Dawn in the next chapter. (I have it written already) As for the bit about Heaven, Buffy has learned by now not to bother trying to fight with the powers. They're going to play her the way they want, not much she can do about it. (At least, this is how it is in my head, I am so sorry that I didn't explain it more in the story. I might go back and add a bit of explaination for that part)
The phone however... at the risk of spoilers I'll just say hold on a bit. I am indeed setting her up, but there's a greater purpose for it.
Hopefully I'll manage to keep them in character. Just please remember to keep an open mind when it comes to Buffy, she changed a good amount in the 6 years before she came to the Marvel world.
Again, thank you for the review. :)
Review By [DeacBlue] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Interesting. I like how Buffy refused and how the Power manipulate her in saying that she can't go back to Heaven. It fits the character, I think. And she did make a spectacular entrance. Can't wait for the next chapter.
DeacBlue
