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xoverfanforeverReview:
You should have added the Sanctuary to his workload. I wonder what his reaction to meeting Helen Magnus would be!
Comments from author:
I don't think it would be that extreme.
After all he saw before and knows now a Carter look a like is not that big
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xoverfanforever] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Schedules" from
VillageOrchidReview:
Interesting and worth expanding with dramatic (and/or humorous) scenes.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and while I don't plan other chapters at the moment it's possible I rethink that in the future
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VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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GideonReview:
They get a good PA. Lol!
Comments from author:
And perhaps a really good secretary and a coffee machine next to the desk :)
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Gideon] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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hottmessReview:
his work load is a bit much its like he got every secret in the US on his desk.
Comments from author:
Well, Director of Homeworld Serurity isn't just a big title...
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hottmess] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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RevDorothyLReview:
Very cute, if somewhat lacking in proof-reading!
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing. And I worked on the problem since writing this story, I finally have a beta
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RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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erikthevikingReview:
A well written and in-character short.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [
eriktheviking] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
