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Review of chapter "Burn This Whole Building Down" from Raider
Review:
well now, thats certainly interesting.
Review By [Raider] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burn This Whole Building Down" from Chan
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The chaos just seems to winding tighter around folks, wonders what new chaos this will create.
Review By [Chan] • Date [24 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burn This Whole Building Down" from cptquinn
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Awesome so far, Cordy's visions could be a real asset to the Connors.
Riley, meh.. I didnt really care for either Riley. =p
Find some way to get Spike in their little group and its perfect. With Cordy, Derek, and then Spike(please?) It will be Snark-fest 2007 lol

No matter how you decide to continue, you must. Cant wait for more.
Comments from author:
Aww, thank you (:
I don't think I can put Spike into this one though, but just because you said that I'm totally going to do a fanfiction with him, hahaha (:
Review By [cptquinn] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burn This Whole Building Down" from thegenuineimitation
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Not a bad concept but Cordy is OOC as is Cameron, Riley is...meh. Anyway try reading your story outloud to yourself, there are some serious POV and grammer errors and some things that just don't make sense. With some tweaking it could be really good though, but tweak before you get started on the other chapters! Por Favor!
Review By [thegenuineimitation] • Date [9 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burn This Whole Building Down" from Gideon
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Wow, crazy stuff for Cordelia - not what she was expecting from a trip to the bank!
I understand now why Cordelia would stay with them. It looks like most of her friends are dead, both in Sunnydale and in LA so she has nowhere to turn. Pity Riley couldn't have left a brief note for Buffy - she could have done with some warning about the Sunnydale crater or the LA apocalypse and they could have an army of Slayers behind them. Oh, well. Maybe they will meet up with a slayer later. I can't wait to see Buffy's face when Riley introduces Mrs Finn!
Comments from author:
Ahaha, I know right?!
Though, I haven't decided if they're going to use different surnames for safety?
Riley is technically AWOL to the military!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [5 Jan 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burn This Whole Building Down" from CrystalBlaze
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One-shotgun wedding? :)
Comments from author:
HAHAHA! Love that (:
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [4 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burn This Whole Building Down" from Greywizard
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"...Cameron shook her head, “No that’s not convincing enough. In order for that situation to work, Riley and Cordelia would have to be married.”
“What?! NO WAY!” Cordelia and Riley began protesting.
Cameron snapped, “If you don’t, I’ll kill you both,”


Now THAT'S the sort of marriage proposal you don't say "No!" to. ;-)

Very interesting set-up and I'm quite interested in seeing where you go with this. ;-)
Comments from author:
Haha, thank you! Got to love when someone quotes you in a positive way! (:
I'm interested in where I will go too, hahaha- don't exactly have a clear outline yet!
Just wanted to see what I could do. After this week, I will have less to do so I will be able to think about it a lot more!
So I hope you stick around, thank you for the review (:
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [3 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Will You Join Us?" from Gideon
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Interesting start. Cameron seems almost helpful in this chapter, lol. I think she would have killed the soldiers though, she didn't have any problems killing bystanders or people who got in the way in the series. Also I think her model was TOK-715. All the T88 terminators were male because of their large body size.
I'm not clear on whether Riley is going with Cameron to New Mexico or not but I guess I'll find out in the next chapter. I wonder if he will tell Buffy anything before he goes.
Comments from author:
As you found out in the second chapter, Buffy was totally out of the loop! Everyone was, he left on a complete whim- a gut feeling. He did go to New Mexico but the events were pretty much the same except for some serious explaining scenes.
... As I'm reading this, I realized I just messed up my corrections on the chapter, wow... I misread her model AGAIN! Grr, gotta go fix it again...
As the story goes on, it will become clear which characters become significant and which do not. Also, I would like to say that this story is really about these five people getting to know each other and depending on each other as they try to stop Skynet in a time that is not their own.
I'm glad you seem to like my story! I hope I can improve for you in the next chapters! (:
Review By [Gideon] • Date [3 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Burn This Whole Building Down" from (Past Donor)morgyair
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Interesting take on the first season of Sarah Connor....does anyone else survive from Buffy or Angel? I look forward to more updates.
Comments from author:
Everyone who survived in Buffy at the end of Season 7 survived in this story, but the Angel characters did not :(
Some of these characters will make appearances later on but stay tuned!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [3 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Will You Join Us?" from CPTSkip
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I liked your story. I'm not sure how Riley would fit in with the SCC, but I think I'd like to see how you do it. You might even toss some of the Scoobies into the mix if your story calls for it.
Comments from author:
I feel ya, I'm trying to figure it out - There are A LOT of possibilities but thank you for the support !
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Will You Join Us?" from Waverly
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I really enjoyed this, and I would love to see more from this universe.
Maybe have the Scoobies track down Riley after the fall of the Initiative to figure out what's going on?
Great job, very intriguing!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much!
I'm going to see if that route is something I would enjoy pursuing, to me the possibilities are endless for this universe and I'm sorting through all those possibilities in hopes of creating a story to exapnd on this one-shot.
I appreciate your support, I hope to be continuing this story soon!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [31 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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