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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raxadian
Review:
Yeah, cause the government in the Marvel universe is such a good choice...
Comments from author:
Any government, in any universe, is never a good choice. ;-(
Review By [raxadian] • Date [4 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from emetcalf
Review:
I really enjoyed this story, would love to see a sequel as this is one of the best Sunnydale Super Hero stories I have read
Comments from author:
Thanks, I appreciate your letting me know you enjoyed the story.

Anything more is entirely up to my muse's whims.
Review By [emetcalf] • Date [20 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Fyrecat
Review:
I really enjoyed this story. Any plans to continue it? Please?
Comments from author:
anything further is up to my muse's whims.

Thanks for reviewing and letting me know you enjoyed the story.
Review By [Fyrecat] • Date [27 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story, I would love to see a follow up to this!
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Anything more depends upon my muse's whims. I'll check and see what she thinks, though.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [9 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Now this is a story it would be nice to see expounded upon. It is a great mix that leaves the SunnyD cradle behind and gives you a lot of free reign.
Comments from author:
Thanks. AS I noted, it was a expansion of a story originally posted by texaswookie, so they should get the opportunity to expand on it, first, if they want.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CageFire
Review:
Good story. Nice job. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [9 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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Oooo-Kaaaayy.... I would have to say that they departed way the heck away from character archetypes in this fic. Mind you, I enjoyed it immensely, but the became very callous overnight and didn't do so by taking on the new imprints personalities. Still, would love to see more!
Comments from author:
True, but the whole point of the story was to get them away from Sunnydale and allow them to shine as superheroes.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
It's too bad that Buffy didn't know the source of the Slayer's powers when she had her encounter with Kendra in the cemetery. I can imagine the following:

"It is not cowardly to slay inhuman creatures," Kendra declared as she turned for a moment and scowled at the two newcomers. "It be the duty of the Slayer to destroy all dat is unearthly and inhuman!"

"Does that mean that you're going to kill yourself," asked Buffy.
Comments from author:
Yeah, that would have been an excellent comeback, but at that point in canon, the implication was that Slayers weres something akin to divinely empowered and blessed champions, not beings tied to the other end of the mystical spectrum.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [14 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mountainelements
Review:
I'm a bit confused though: If Buffy dressed as Supergirl from the comics that Xander read, has all the powers of Supergirl, and calls herself Supergirl, then why hasn't anyone recognized her from the comic book?
Comments from author:
Well, some of the SHIELD analysts have pointed that out, but Fury's the type who doesn't believe that anything could be that easy. ;-)

Especially since in the comics, Supergirl is an extraterrestrial who's a refugee from a planet which blew up, and is mostly vulnerable only to radioactive pieces of that planet. And, if she really was who she appears to be, he doesn't have any of those fragments available to use against her.

Another factor is that Fury and SHIELD are uncertain whether the powers she's shown are ALL of the powers she possesses, or whether she might be holding some back.

They*think* she might be the same as the comic book character, but they aren't sure.
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mountainelements
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"Fury figured he had to get these three in line now, before they eventually caused more problems than they solved, or they hooked up with Logan. Whichever came first." I'd love to see that! Great story. I really enjoyed how the trio stayed together. It was hilarious how Xander kept asking for autographs. I hope you write a sequel to this, and the trio stays together in that one too. I'd also like to see Mrs. Summers. I'm not sure if they'd work, but I have this image of Mrs. Summers and Nick Fury together, especially with how scarily good Joyce was at getting money from the Watchers' Council.
Comments from author:
There's a good bit about Joyce that's yet to be seen, and I think that once you do, you're gonna say, 'Travers got off easy.' ;-)

More to come, but when it shows is entirely up to my muse.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from becuzitswrong
Review:
This is a great story! My ONLY gripe is that it's one chapter, not 60 plus. The story is crying out for a sequel. Can you hear it? "Greywizard, sequel me, sequel me!" I may have just moved this story to the top of the list of your stories that I like, which is saying a lot. Thanks very much for writing it!
Comments from author:
Not to worry - there will be a sequel (or two), it's just a matter of getting my muse's attention focused long enough to get it written.

I'm working on at least a dozen stories at the moment, either for the next chapter of existing ones, or on new ones that my muse has decided she wants written.
Review By [becuzitswrong] • Date [8 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from justapiranha
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ok i really like it. I like how you kept buffy as the superpower of the team and gave xander a power that goes with his personality, and likewise for willow. you were able to keep true to the characters while still keeping to cannon timelines. great job. is there going to be sequel?
Comments from author:
Thank you. ;-)

And yes, I expect that there will be at least one follow-up to this, but when it will appear, I currently have no idea.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [6 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Travers actions make zero sense unless Giles said the costumes affected them without saying who they dressed as, which sounds like something he'd do to protect them. Really need to have that in there so we know why he considered them powerless to stop him and useless. Other than that I loved this fic and would like to see more of it.
Comments from author:
Since Giles wasn't at all familiar with the characters the kids dressed as, he wasn't able to give Travers and the Council much information about them aside from very general recitations of what Xander had told him they could do. Moreover, since he wasn't all that certain about how that news would be received, he also figured that providing minimal information was the best way to deal with the situation and protect the kids.

Note that all of Giles' comments in the Council personnel's presence were worded so that he could point out the *benefits* to Buffy that no longer being the Slayer would receive, while not bad-mouthing the Council itself. He also tried to point out to Travers that there could be additional benefits to the Council by maintaining cordial relations with Buffy and the Scoobies, but it was Travers who chose not eve consider them.

This is something that will be focused on in another story, although I'm not quite certain when that will be showing up, since it depends entirely on my muse's whims, and she's focusing her attention on some of my WIPs at present.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [6 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Nicely written.

I don't know the Sparx character, though. But an idea is for Willow to have an epiphany, and be able to convert into a body made of electricity, and be able to travel at lightning bolt speed. (And through electrical cables)

Travers made a mistake, they are altered humans (like Spiderman or Captain America), not "non-human". (The WC is stupid in that it doesn't apparently recognize the peaceful demon races). Killing them would be MURDER.
"vulnerable to magic" actually means "no special defenses". All of Buffy's extra "armor" is simply not vs. magic. She would still have human- or perhaps Slayer-level defenses vs. magic. She doesn't have a GURPS-speak Susceptibility or Vulnerability to magic, but an Accessibility limitation on DR.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing.

Sparx was a member of DC Comics' Legion of Superheroes, set in 30th century Earth. She could project bolts of electricity from her hands, and that was about it, but given that Willow is Willow (i.e, quite smart and extremely knowledgeable about the relationships between electrons and other subatomic particles) and not constrained by most conventional ideas, I expect her to not remain limited to just that ability for any great length of time. ;-)

Travers is a petty man, who revels in his power over people and couldn't really care about the actual differences between altered human and non-human, and thinks he knows enough about 'the things that really matter' to be able to make such pronouncements. He's probably going to learn he's wrong sooner, rather than later. ;-)

And you're correct about Buffy's abilities, but as far as the Council's attitude is concerned, that's just splitting hairs. The weapons Kendra possessed could have seriously injured Buffy if Kendra scored a hit, and she wouldn't have been trying to simply *injure* Buffy, but *kill* her, so there was no real reason to have a throw-down then and there.

Had Travers have Kendra try to kill Buffy, it would have been a slaughter, given the facts that the Council really didn't know all that much about Xander's and Willow's characters' abilities, either, and would not have been prepared for what they coudl actually do.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [6 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Questara
Review:
Great story, I like it, but then I saw it was finished... Any chance of more?
Comments from author:
I'm sure there will be more, but when is up to my very fickle muse. ;-)

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Questara] • Date [5 Jan 11] • Not Rated
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