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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Chan
Review:
boy wonders if it's really sank in for frieda yet if all I've known is gone I'm not sure I'd be so calm
Welcome to this new world we've dump you on, It's a reward for keeping the faith.
Personally buffy often seems like destiny's whipping post.
Really kind of curious as to what happens next.

Whoops Fox I meant.
Comments from author:
thanks for the review, but who is frieda?
Review By [Chan] • Date [3 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from MrGordo
Review:
Brilliant as always, Can I vote to make it Buffy\Foxx\Faith? Cause as much as B may be rebuilding her relationship with Willow. I doubt the trust level with ANY Scoob is quite the same as it was.

At the same time her bond with both Foxx and Faith is palpable.
Review By [MrGordo] • Date [4 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Raider
Review:
this is perhaps one of my favorite stories.

it flows well and reads good so far.
Review By [Raider] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
This whole story line is a really neat idea. I can't wait to read more :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Shucks, why didn't Buffy run into somebody like that when she was flipping burgers at DMP? Even if her reward had been only $100K, that'd still be better than the minimum wage grease factory.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
Yeah, you already know I like it, but I'm reviewing anyway. Like it! Carry on. :) Oh, and thank you for everything!
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Chan
Review:
Interesting the contacts made here might have manpower if things go total fubar while the ladies prep for what's coming a fall back point if things don't go well
Equally interesting is how quickly foxx is intergrated into buffy's mental space.
Review By [Chan] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Raider
Review:
another excellent chapter.

I got a kick out of the end.
Review By [Raider] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Chan
Review:
An interesting reunion to be sure, although if buffy was attempting to stay under the radar with the cops even with as little damage she did she'd probably going to get noticed.
Review By [Chan] • Date [14 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Raider
Review:
the kick to the chest was perfect.
Review By [Raider] • Date [13 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
hmm...gov. agents kid? Anyways, great update.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [2 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from McGurrin
Review:
I like it and hope more comes soon.
Review By [McGurrin] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Amai
Review:
Very interesting so far, I like the background you've established and the bits to come you've hinted at.
Review By [Amai] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from evilredknight
Review:
Please , please, please. No 'adopting' the little kid, cuz' he has no place to go.
Maybe I wrong, but that's what popped into my head I read this.
I can't stand OC children in stories. They always feel so artificial to me.
And enough is enough. Buffy and Foxx net to get it on.
Neither of these women strike me as the beat around the bush kind of people anymore.

Just noticed one thing.
Chapter 2 had Foxx buying a 2005 Camaro. Except there is no 2005 Camaro.
Production ended in 2002 and started again in 2009 with the new design.
Did you mean she bought an old(retro) say 1969 that had been totaly torn down and rebuilt as new?
Now this latest chapter has her car as a Dodge Viper.
You need to fix that.
Comments from author:
I look up all the vehicles (and most of the weapons) that I choose for my characters. Have to know if I'll like them or not.

Here's the 2005 Retro Camaro

http://www.fastcoolcars.com/2005retro_camaro.htm

But thanks for the Viper notice.
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [31 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Raider
Review:
I couldnt decide what to say.

so, I'll say, in short, outstanding!
Review By [Raider] • Date [31 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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